One of the best out there!

its interesting to see peoples interpretations of the robin from lucinas future, or in this case his distinct absence

this is a pretty great pairing I must admit, and you chose a cool premise with which to tell it.

Still my favourite fanfic to this day, and only better upon a 2nd read through! Cheers.

"I'd like to introduce you to Morgan. She … is our daughter. We found her during our trip into town."
She followed us home; can we keep her?

"But just so you know, you are forbidden from having your children travel through time."
"Aww."
That was the cutest "aww" I've heard in a long time.

Didn't know Texas existed in the fire emblem universe, lol.

"I guess your right"
His right what?
Oddly, you haven't made many your/you're, their/there/they're, or its/it's errors. It's mostly other stuff that I'll likely pm you about later.

"I made sure to clean up most of the spelling, grammar, and other problems that my younger self had trouble with. I know that these problems sometimes show up in my newer chapters as well, and I'm working hard to fix them."
"Sometimes"?

Finished binge reading this story. Delightful, heart-warming, and an incredible experience altogether. Will definitely favorite. Nice touch with the chapter titles. n_n Just curious, but what was Kjelle's ultimate fate in this story? O.o

"I wouldn't dare hurt my husband, even in his cute little form."
Chapter 21 suggests differently. (The game's, not the story's)

"It's okay. I got Mark's permission. He said as long as I didn't touch the flower bed I could dig to my heart's content. He even said if I found some gold we could split it 50/50. Although, if I find ancient artifacts, then I can sell them to people at the black market for ten times the price!"
I like Mark.

"Mark also said they are infectious and would eat my soul if I let them get too close."
I 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 like Mark, though that does sound pretty accurate.

"They say that finding peace is a foolish dream, so it will take a bunch of fools to find a way to do it."
I like that line. I'm gonna save it for later.

"Or it is more likely that you are secretly a bird in disguise,"
She's on to you, Robin! Quickly! Fly away!
Little do they know that he's actually a penguin. A flying penguin.

"Indeed. It seems that our grand tactician has deceived us despite the warnings of his teacher,"
Were you not listening to the earlier part about sucking away souls, Lucina? Mark would've likely endorsed his opinion.

"I was uncomfortable for far different reasons," *quietly sneaks off to use this line in one of his own stories later, leaving no evidence behind*

"I think that all this time you have remembered your past, but you were too afraid to reveal all the embarrassing details of your youth"
And he wanted to get rich off of all the artifacts he sold on the black market. He likely has hundreds of off-shore accounts.

"Hmph. How could you do that, dear?" I like Lucina too.

"I need to be on guard for bandits or loose women."
I can just hear Mark adding, "Especially the women!"

That's touching and all, but how did Sarah know what was said during Robin and his mom's discussion? Was she eavesdropping on them too?

And my suspicions were correct! 'Robin, I am your mother.'

You're just trying to break my little heart, aren't you? Well, i-it won't—*sniff*—work.

"Looks more like you are spying, but if means a cookie, I will accept the bribe."
He knows how this game works.

"Probably, and she will likely try to incite a riot. You know how picky she can be."
Later, in the burning streets of Plegia, Morgan says, "They knew the risks of not giving me my story fix. Now, they suffer the consequences," as she leads a mob of people in a riot.

"Lucina, you're not making this easy on me."
Still the master of "totally not helping".

If Chrom finds out you've been sleeping together, you'll wish that workout had killed you.

"Besides, how would we torment Chrom without you? I can't do it all by myself, and you have a gift for making him twitch."
Ah, family bonding over Chrom's suffering…

"Awww. But I wanted to see them go bang-bang!"
The bandits or the newlyweds? I really hope he means the former.

Favorite part this chapter:
"And then we went to sleep! We went directly to sleep! We did not pass go, we did not collect 200 gold coins"