That's it? That's all there is? It doesn't feel done to me. I love it and want more. Seems that LoVe being together already when Lilly was killed would really alter the events of season one. Sure wish there was more. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Holy crap. I love this story. Wish it continued.

What a way to end this story. I would love to know what happens next since it is a little AU. I loved it though.

Awesome ending!

holy shit. i dont really know what to say except that i read this whole thing at one in the morning because i couldnt stop reading and i love the way it all played out. i also think you have captured the kanes personalities perfectly!

Wow what a turn to the story... liking your version though...

oh my God... that's it? I... I'm not even sure I want this to be done already. ;A;

OMG
wht would have happened if V had told Duncan, maybe told him to go n call the cops without letting Logan know

wonder wht the Kanes will do now, hope they don't blame V and Logan
and where they informed tht Lilly was missing with Arron

I hope Jake uses Weidman against Arron, maybe Keith and him should work together to bring him down

will Arron try coming after V now

can't wait for ur next update

Omg! This story is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Holy guacamole! This story is really good, excited for more!

Omg! Im so scared for everyone. Lily is such a fool, Aaron is so evil. How are they going to get out of this?

And still a sad ending for Lilly - though a Lilly who got horny watching Aaron beat Logan is one this world can live without. Duncan clueless, as usual, and Keith in protective Daddy mode. The biggest home is that things would improve for Logan and Lynn after all this.

What?! Aaron go away with killing Lilly and all he did to Logan? mmm feels like and where is the end?

If he was found dead with Lilly or that Lilly kill him in self defense that would be awesome. well maybe an epilogue. maybe?

Wow Aaron really is a psychopath. I am just happy that Logan and Veronica are okay well for now. Honestly I can't believe that Lilly didn't seem to care who she hurt. It is going to an interesting rest of a story

Wow, I didn't think Lilly would die, shocker. Nice job on this.