A very touching take on the events leading up to Dick becoming Robin. Sometimes, less really is more.

FELT. DEEP.
I'm not crying ;_;

Cool!

BRILLIANT!...and I've got to go to bed but I dont wanna groan...hate school!

very nice

I was so glad to see a new YJ fic posted from you and I am happy to hear that you are going to post more stories soon. I loved this! This was beautiful, so much was said in just a few words! I loved how you described John Grayson's and Bruce's eyes in this and how so much was said between Dick and his 'fathers' by Dick looking into their eyes.

I am so happy to see something new from you, however short. This was a very tragic, sad, poignant little piece. Lovely, heartbreaking piece of writing. Love how Dick said Bruce became his pillar.

Gorgeous.

Beautiful.

So very very well done. A set piece and pivotal. Everything you have done is well done. This short work is no exception. Great job of using the eyes to move from one father to the other. This could be expanded into other eyes in Dick's life. Maybe a chapter or two-just an idea. Thanks for writing this! Enjoyed it

That was nice. Maybe not your usual story, but it shows a lot of depth and understanding of the character. Nice job.

This was really 's really cool how you wrote it about his father's eyes because it allows you to create a deeper least that's what I felt.

Love your YJ stories srsly