| Reviews for In The Dark |
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Cass-has no ac chapter 14 . 6/10 I actually loved Bella in this chapter and completely agree, you need to respect the person you love. Edward was being incredibly cruel to Jacob, and treating him like an object. Side note: don’t ever out someone as gay, not only is it very personal, but many times people are not in safe positions to come out. Just a PSA. As a Bi person If any other than me had come out to my parents I would feel awful. I am lucky to have accepting parents, many don’t have the luxury and could get up in a very dangerous situation. |
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 26 . 4/26 not just at dawn but the butt-crack of dawn |
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 19 . 4/26 Rosabitch is going to live up to her name, Emmett is going to make so many wisecracks i'm feeling sorry for my sides that are going to be splitting from laughter. Alice is going to be annoyed because Jake fucks up her visions. Everyone else will be cool with it. |
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 15 . 4/26 I'm going to assume you are not American, because Phoenix is not in Washington State but in Arizona. which by a simple google map search is nearly 1500 miles away |
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 12 . 4/26 OMG! you people are slow. She's a shield. Her lack of self-preservation and selflessness is the personification of the shield in human form. This is in response to the rather long-winded AN regarding Bella being selfish or selfless |
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 10 . 4/26 I am enjoying this story.. hopfully I find it to be a triad relationship in the end but I doubt it. However in this chapter, I do find Edwards words contradict themselves. While on his era sex before marriage is taboo, so would a homosexual relationship. |
tdetwilightlover chapter 13 . 2/20 Jesus someone give this woman a medal |
thatdreamerboy chapter 17 . 2/6/2019 YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT LAST BILLY QUOTE THOOOOOOOOOOUGH |
OnlyRobPatti chapter 1 . 11/6/2017 ;) que maldosa |
XxLittleMissMidnightxX chapter 31 . 10/13/2017 I enjoyed this fic tremendously. I love how gracefully Bella took it. I've read so many Edward and Jacob fics where the writer turns Bella into an obsessed witch. And Bella has always been one of my characters. Thanks for a great story! |
HarryMalfoy09 chapter 31 . 9/27/2017 that was a great read! love it! u captured bella in a way that really did her justice... |
bartlettpear chapter 31 . 2/11/2017 ("Tell me he makes you happy," she begged in a whisper. "More than I ever though possible." I replied, my heart in my throat.) Their friendship is really lovely, thank you for doing them justice. Thank you for writing! |
bartlettpear chapter 30 . 2/11/2017 This was a really cute chapter, Jacob joking about the spirits probably hating him enough already, Jacob snuggling closed to Edward even though he thinks he has to go, Edward pointing out that Jacob still hasn't responded to his proposal, and Jacob's bewildered but still amenable acceptance of Edward's proposal. |
bartlettpear chapter 26 . 2/11/2017 Bella's no, no, no, no, no, mad me laugh. And that line with Jacob looking at the shirts and how they still looked the same haha In other news, being in situations where you really can't see what is wrong when apparently everyone else around you can is mortifying. |
bartlettpear chapter 25 . 2/11/2017 I really loved Charlie's POV, his talk to both Jacob and Edward (I wish I got to hear something like this when I was younger) and how Charlie doesn't beat around the bush so everyone knows where they stand. |