Really Great Story!

Are you really gonna leave it there?

I want more!

OH MY GOSH! Wow! That was great! You would not believe how long I have waited for someone to write this story! It was wonderfully written; I was on the edge of my seat the whole entire time! Please continue writing, you are a fantastic author! P.S- Malone is my favorite character ).

LOL! That was great! I too recently found out that Malone thinks! ;) I like the season finale from his POV- it gives a clue to what he might have been going through on his time away from the explorers. Maybe (just a suggestion) you could've used different times than the ones his friends went through- I do like the part with Maplewhite, though. That was interesting. VERY awesome- can't wait for the next part! :) :) :)