Yes as much as I love M/R or R/M I would have liked a bit more about Veronica and Ned's adventure. That was part of the story, right? I mean you don't slip and claim a vine as your only support for life and not gain a cut...or an injury. You never mentioned any on them or how they got completely home without injury. I would have liked a bit more of that part of the story even if it had been meant to be mostly focussed on M/R

This was GREAT- is that it? You can't leave us like that- you have to have Marguerite talk to Roxton about what he said... Awesome job- very well written. :) :) :)