Reviews for Legends of Olympus: Flame of the West
Varuna.tr chapter 2 . 7/17
I read this story and I forgot its name ..now I found it again ..wow nice story and characters..loved percy and his relationship to the world around him... please consider updating it
Sara the pretty bookworm chapter 9 . 5/9
Hay :) it's been a while since this has been updated, but is there any hope for that Reyna chapter? Since you said this story was meant to be an epic fantasy like GoT and WoT, you must've had a general idea where the plot was going, a rough idea how it would end. Would you be so kind as to post a quick author's note sharing what you were planning to do with this awesome story? At least give those who really really loved this work some closure? Even if you don't, I still thank you for having taken the time to write this. It has been a true pleasure reading it :)
Leviathan eater chapter 1 . 4/23
You have too continue this story
BlackGodofDarkness chapter 9 . 3/28
amazing story

please update
NoboOdY chapter 9 . 9/7/2019
THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST PJO FIC I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! Everything is written beautifully and, you just had to end on a cliffhanger! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
JusticeNotRevenge chapter 9 . 4/24/2019
Holy Hera... That... Wow... More...? Please...?

(I'm literally awed in a way no words can express)
JusticeNotRevenge chapter 5 . 4/24/2019
This is literally what I've been wanting to read for months. Mortals are aware of the gods etc. And the demigods show ranks and power. This is even better. The triumvirate... Oh gods, Jason, Percy and Nico as the heads of the empire... That is amazing. I have to say Jason seems a bit too used to sitting on his high throne but at least he still has a sense of who he is and who he can't be. Percy is exactly what I expected. And Nico is everything an Empire needs. And the ranks... Oh the ranks. Clarisse and the Spartans. Nico and the Blackcoats. The Legions. The Praetors. The Cohorts. The Ceasar. The Lord Commander... Oh man... Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
I know it's not finished yet but I would like to translate it into Vietnamese to share with the Vietnam fandom if you let me.
ScarletAvenger chapter 9 . 12/19/2018
Sorry for the reddit hug of death! But I am really enjoying this story and whether or not you decide to continue is your choice. I just binge read it in one afternoon, that’s how engrossed I was! Everything is realistic including how the characters might act. And overall it’s an amazing story
Dretoven chapter 9 . 12/4/2018
wow. CombatTombat recommended this and it was amazing! I have never liked stories about the mist failing, but everything about it I love, especially the portrayal of the seven. And Percy! Love what you've done with him and the hype around him. Nico too! Two of my favorite PJO characters. Nice work! wish the story was still going:(
randomcoolusername chapter 9 . 11/4/2018
This story is amazing. I love the Game of Thrones ,exapanding on each character, style. each chapter excites me even more and I can't wait for the next update of this story.
asif989 chapter 9 . 6/12/2018
Wow. One of the best stories of read for PJO. A well written original idea. Can't wait to read the rest
Guest chapter 8 . 5/29/2018
Please please please update this is sooooo good
Redrobin4 chapter 9 . 1/20/2018
This is the best story ever. Hands down one of the best stories of any fandom. Please update at some point if you can. It is a really good story for it to be left unfinished.
Fallen Archangels chapter 9 . 1/2/2018
How dare you. How dare you stop there this is most incredible thing ever holy shit
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