god damn u had me crying all the way through again

what the hell this got me to cry all the way through I really like this story so far. it pulls at your heart

Wtf is wrong with you man Jesus Christ

*Slams his head against the keyboard a few times*

Ok a couple of problems I noticed with this but I will point out the one that was getting at me the most. The third in your story if I remember correctly was mentioned to be dead, so why did Kakashi and Naruto mention him as if he was alive?

When I read summary only god know, how excited and interested I was, but you kind of messed up accord to me. I wont abuse you or say harsh words to you, but this story could have been way much better.

But in the end I know how hard it is to write story, so all I say, better work next time.
For plot I will give you a big thumbs up.
Keep it up

Nigga your ass is a phedophile just kidding.

Okay I've read this story a couple years ago and now I'm reading it again all I have to say is wtf is wrong wit u. Like seriously u made hirashi be like another version of orochimaru and his whole reason is retarded not only that but u made the hyuga clan worse than the uchiha clan.

And u made hinata into some pathetic whore I mean seriously the only way for hanabi was not to get rape was for her to have sex wit him and beat her that makes it even worse not only is she hurting her own little sister but she is enjoying getting rape like what is wrong wit you. You have made hinata whoring herself out and your telling me that hinata couldn't have gone to hiruzen.

And dude u literally had sat down and think about her abuse and her getting rape. You need some Jesus god and holy water mother fucker because u are sick and needs help. I don't have a problem wit naruto x hanabi but to have a problem how u wrote hinata

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I LOVE IT! ONE OF THE BEST NARUHANA EVER! :')

This was good but... She's 7

No just fucking no...

I have nothing to say other than you are one sick perverted fuck no matter how much anybody says that what you write is needed to go with the story makes no difference to what you write is totally disgusting and angers me to no end that I want nothing more than to just beat the everliving crap out of you and anybody else who agrees with your sick twisted ways , on a side note I hate rape in all forms so if I ever found out who you are and meet I WILL beat the shit out of you.

WAAAAAAAAHHH! THAT WAS SO HORRIBLE! I WAS CRYING LIKE A BABY OUT OF IT'S MOM'S VAGINA! GOD DAMMIT THAT SHIT WAS SO SAD! BUT YOU DID AMAZING AND PAIRED WITH THE SONG "Vampire Knight Guilty Main Theme OST II" IT WAS EVEN MORE HORRIFYINGLY SAD!
I congratulate *Sniff* you on officially *Sniff* making Hanabi *Sniff* my favorite *Sniff* pairing ever.

Wow this chapter holds the sacred power of he feels and made me cry which is no easy feat this is an excellent beginning of a romance