(GASPS) Kira! How could you!?

(Touches one of Kira’s Cookies) Well I’m not on the archangel so...(munches on said cookie)

Wait so you made this a crossover without putting it in the crossover category?

After reading about proper military structures and what-not hearing “intelligence commando division” just sounds weird.

Don’t know how I feel about the romance here...feels a bit rushed but good lemon and chapter overall.

So mc is already in love? kinda lame
Prefer the slow romance where there are actually feelings or something instead of.
Oh we have seen each other for 2 weeks lets fuck...

lets not even talk about takashi..

smh

Happy Birthday Takeshi Yamato. Wish you many more.

Hey, I read your Mass effect one and just started with this. I can see you were already planning on writing that story, got to the part where Joker was mentioned. Nice...

Dang im into yuri i did not think that kira would like that guy and wow they work fast already pregnant and isnt kira under age? Like kira is what like 16-17 :/

Damn Hanami is Sacry...thou not as bad as some women i know eah.

love it love it

holy shit that was one of the best storys i have read in AGES. I really cant wait to see the sequel.

Ok with an ending like this one would expect a Mass Effect cross-over with this as a prequel. I know you already have a story like that but it was a different back story, but it hasn't been touched in a while. And lets be honest, This site could use more Mass Effect X Gundam Fanfics

Now that it's finnalły over,
I'm gonna reread the whole damn story because it's worth it...
Though I have already reread it like 4 times.(refer to pass review)
Now I can't wait for the sequel. Gonna see more ME in it.

Love Rule Seven. Can definitely follow that one. A fun ride so far and some of more intense lemons I have seen. Kind of fits with everything else, though. Starting to become attached to Ryu, Hanami, and Kagami. Seen them in a few stories so far and beginning to think of them along the same lines as characters like Shirou, Naruto, and Ichigo. Some of the most 'fleshed-out' OC's I have seen, which is a plus in my book. Traits I like, I have no problem looking for in OC's when they are created and used well. Looking at some of your other stories after this. Any recommendations for something along the lines of this or Metal Gear Solid: Phantom SEED. That is an awesome story that I hope to see continue.