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This story is awesome! Update soon please

I hope you'll update this 'cuz this is damn awesome! I didn't expect much from this story at the beginning, shouldn't have judged it so early, but now it's in my top five of all times. You fit her perfectly in the storyline. Now I'm just waiting to hear what Shinsuke really thinks of her and for him to finally confront her. Using 'the right words' this time.

I ENJOYED IT! HOPE YOU'LL UPDATE SOON! REALLY INTERESTED IN THIS STORY AND CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHATS GONNA HAPPEN

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Oooooh updates soon plsssssssss! Heck I'm totally sticked? Stuck? to your fic!

WHERE IS THE REST!? I WWAAAANNNNNNNTTTTTT MOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEE! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update! I've been looking for some really good gintama fics, and I really wanna know what'll happen next in here! Please please UPDATE! PUH-LEEAAZE! ヽ(o；

Please update soon! I want more!

*fangirl scream* I seriously can't take all the cutenesssss! Takasugi is just so cute. I can't even- *dies*

Ohkays, I admit, I am very weak for fluff *snorts* but this chapter gave me all this mixed feelings. I mean, I cried half of this chapter when Miwa told what Hosen put them through And Hinowa smiling brightly that rainy day.. Ughh.. It was just so beautiful.

Yup, appreciate that you did all you could to fit this in Gintama's plot, yes. Ikkoku Keisei arc tho, you could have explain Miwa's wherabouts but well, it was okay like that too. I like her and Suzuran's relationship.

I muat say, you've done a good job with rhis story. Your writing style, plot, everything. I just wish you made something crazy for Miwa's personality. She needs it to fit more in Gintama. And a flaw, which would make the story more interesting. Now she just seems like a strong beautiful woman who fell in love with Takasugi. More flaws, she needs.

Shinsuke well.. I don't think he'll be able to fall in love with anyone anymore, which makes me feel bad for Miwa. I am waiting for their conversation, I wonder how Miwa will react to his dark side..

Anyhows I'm waiting for your updates alright! Please write mooore!

ANOTHER LOVELY CHAPTER! Takasugi's so romantic *giggles* with all his poems and comb. I actually cried when Miwa got her comb with her. It was very beautiful moment. And else, I believe you could have given Tsukuyo more screentime. Aren't you rushing it with the flashback? I still loved this chapter very much. I like Miwa's strength but to be better than Zura and Shinsuke was maybe a bit too much for me to believe.
And Gintoki.. well, he's just sweetheart and I cried when he told her to stay. It was heartwarming moment.

I have a feeling that when their house/dojo was burned, it was before Ginny and fellas went to the war, wasn't it? And where was Tsukuyo during Hinowa's birth? Would think someone who swore to protect their sun to be there when she needs it.

Maybe you should think more of the other characters than only Miwa? I know this is from her viewpoint but giving out more moments to the other characters makes her less of a Mary Sue, in my opinion.

But seriously, I really do believe this story is awesome and kudos to your writing style and fighting scenes!

I wonder what happens next, HOSEN BE GENTLE WITH MIWA! Ohnoes, I'm scared now.

Another chapter read, this is lovely to read honestly. *wants to review every chapter* I seriously lost it few times while reading this. All hail to your Gintama-ish humor! *bows* No, seriously the bear-Elizabeth was awesome.

And usually I am used to that in Shouyo's class everyone are quiet and because his students respected him, they were too shy to actually behave unexpectadly in his class.. WAY TO GO CRUSH THAT CLAIM! I totally loved the playful atmosphere between the children and Sensei. Sensei was.. You gave Shouyo-sensei justice. *obsessed with Shouyou*

Anyhows, first Takasugi's behaviour made me think that maybe he was just jealous of the attention Miwa stole from him since he too was pretty much a one who loved his Sensei. I even am thinking that Shinsuke might have been his favorite student too and Miwa was a threat. Altho, I would have preferred that, it seems Takasugi having a crush on Miwa suits the plot better. *nod*

I still have a feeling that I haven't caught Miwa's personality well. Is it too soon to be trying to know her, I dunno. I just have a feeling that there's nothing yet what makes her fit into Gintama.. I did say 'yet' didn't I? Like she does have that painful childhood, and she wants to get stronger but I need moar!

Ohkays putting my blabberings aside, I am looking forward for your next chapter.

Seeyaa!

Mymy, what a lovely start you have here. I'm sorry I couldn't read all of your chapters yet but after reading the first chapter, I must say that I couldn't contain myself.

Anyhows, I really love your idea of Ginny's little sister and Takasugi's earlier crush.. *whisper* while he was still sane. Aaaaand, there are so many characters in here and so in character, I was very happy. Bansai although could have been a bit more.. blank? I mean inexpressive, you totally gave him the nice-guy role here. But well, that must be your viewpoint of his character.

I laughed when Kamui and Miwa ganged up against Abuto *snorts* I am totally in love with Abuto here :D lovely the way you used his character here aaand Miwa. I can't say much about her, now that I only read one chapter but I'm looking forward to know her more *nods*

Hrm, first while I was reading this, I was a bit taken aback of that Miwa wasn't there whwn Ginny saved the Yoshiwara.. was like, could it be she had missed the Yoshiwara arc just like that? But glad you cleared it out.

And it would be nice if you deepened Hinowa's and Taukuyo's relationship with Miwa, the courtesans of Yoshiwara do share a strong bond after all.

So many things I'm curious of, so many things I'm curious of! I am so looking forward to read next chapters soon I get sleepand few thinga done. Till then..

Seeyaaa! :D

liked the ending of this chapter. keep it up.

liked the dialogue in this chapter. keep it up.

Could you please mark your character as oc, but disrupts the filtering, Now appreciate!