I love this! Really excited for the next chapter!

really enjoying this especially the whole Ren and Jaune thing, really sad to see its been so long since you last updated so i hope i get to see more really soon.

holy fuck i dont remember this chapter but holy fuck i do remember i loved this sotory with eerything and i still love it till now
im not sure you'll ever update but. This is greats and if you find time and motivations it'll be an honor to keep reading it

I honestly thought it was a real poem it's really pretty but also quite sad

I love this story please update soon.

Talk about a cliff hanger! Brilliant story so far though keep up the good work!

How do you pronounce the team names?

fuck, they are gonna kill her
FIGHT VELVET! i love this story

Darn it! This story is really good and I wanna know what happens next! Plus, I'm pretty sure you turned me into a Juane X Ren shipper, not that I mind, so I can't wait to see what happens next!
MaskMaiden Out, peace!

Aww, there's no more?

Please don't abandon this. It's amazing and I have to know what happens.

This is amazing
Update please

wow this is amazing. i love the spin you've put on the characters, my only gripe would be that the last few chapters have been a little difficult to follow, can't wait for the next chapter :D

oh little falcon is a nice poem non the less

Please continue this it's awesome.

OK, I personally HATE! poetry (except haiku cause those are fun) with a fiery passion that defies all reason and logic. It lies somewhere just below Nazis and right above hippies on my scale of 'things to kill if I get a time machine.' And I still feel I should compliment you on 'oh little falcon.' That's how impressive it was.