That's a fucked up mansion. Kill yourself there and you love forever.

I have to say this is the best writing I've seen in a long time, you have amazed me beyond my own imagination and I have to thank you for your dedication and if I could kiss your mind I definetly would lol Bella's caring personality comes just in time to make an act of complete abandon in the end, I have to say there's something in the water that makes girls turn into vampires lol not just simple girls, but twisted and traumatized girls like Alice and Bella, totally destined to be together forever. Thank you endlessly!

Amazing chapter and such a beautiful way to end it, thank you so much for sharing this story, I can see some similarities with ''Alice'' Another work of yours and it's really refreshing but also terrifying because I can totally imagine this Alice before her encounter with highschool Bella

Scarily good. Brilliant writing that had me engaging right from the start. Cried at the ending. Beautiful.

This story was beautiful. Their love brought me to tears. Thank you for writing this.

Yeah, I'd say they earned their happy ending.

Tearing up at this. This has been gritty enough that I don't want it to end in a cheesy, then Bella became a vampire too and everything was great. But at the same time, I'm attached enough to these two that I do kind of want a happy ending...

Fuck...

God, Alice's possessive, "I'm glad you don't have any friends" is just the creepy cherry on the poisonous cake. Can't say I'm not enjoying it though. Really going all out on the star crossed lovers played straight thing aren't you?

Alice is pretty much just waiting for it to finish at this point. Accepts that Bella's addicted already and is just trying to distance herself from as much guilt as possible by making Bella repeat that this is what she wants. She'd even come right out and said that she'd seduce her into this early on...

God...

Such a beautiful disaster. Have to admire the way the two live in the moment, though Bella's lack of concern is a little sad to see.

Dayum, love how dark, gritty and real you're getting with this. I thought it'd just be general immortal angst but she makes them say they want it even if every feeding brings the moment she loses control, closer. Yeah, I'd say this is definitely darker than the Cullens repetition of high school life...

Alice is scarily good at this. Has a perfected system of honesty and evidence to convince them of what she is so that they can't complain later as well as the act of leading them through sex to get over their hangups. I wouldn't go so far as to call it creepy since I don't want to be judgemental but it feels depressingly empty.

Beautifully done. Especially how she goes about it so endearingly cheery.

Damn, that was really hot cute and weirdly compelling. Such an awesome air of simplicity to it. I didn't think I was in the mood for another cheesy romance but this is really enaging.

It’s so beautiful! AAAHHHH!
Sorry. I had to fangirl scream for a second. Anyway, this story is amazing! Life going in a full circle and Alice taking her mother’s place as willing to die to protect who she loved, and Bella becoming Alice, willing to take her own life before watching her love die. They both ‘killed’ themselves and were granted a second life, only this time, it was a happy ending. Alice didn’t have to live without what she loved anymore. Bella and Alice can both be at peace, though in way, Alice and her mother’s version of the tale did end with peace for her mother, a loving death at the hands of her beloved daughter rather than passing away in the night.
Of course, why am I just recapping your story? You already know this! You thought it up in that mind brain of yours!
Okay, this is getting long, so I’ll go ahead and finish up. This is a truly beautiful peice of literature, and I am truly blessed to have had it bestowed upon me.
Thank you.
-An