I would love you to continue this

This was perfect. Not too dark, not too fluffy. Thanks! I'm new to revolution & to the Charlie Monroe fandom, but I really appreciate the time you put into this.

Holy hell, that was good!

*Q* ... wow. That was one amazing fic!

Their chemistry was extremely intense! OMG!
Well done!

Wow. You're really good at this whole writing thing. I enjoyed the ratio of backstory to smut. Definitely a must read.

I think all I can say is wow! You should definitely keep posting.

You have now officially ruined anything the writers could think up to give us as a scene between these two if they do ever pair them up on the show and they have a first time. You know that, right? Sorry writing so much to you, but I'm reading all your fics at once.

Loved it

Just - wow, beautifully written and shamelessly HOT!

That was hot. I was hoping for more.

Wow...holy crap... *fans self* that was awesome. :) And on a more eloquent note, I loved the way you described their relationship; just enough backstory to justify the buildup of tension without being overdone. Well written with plenty of humor, which can be a key component of smut! Wonderful job, can't wait to read more Revolution fic from you!

so intimate ;) love it! charloe is just so amazing! great work xx

This is AMAZING! - I wish you'd write more )

You have no idea how much I loved this story! It's the first Bass/Charlie story I ever read, and it pretty much cemented my love for this pairing. Please consider writing more, because this was amazing.