Good grief, I love Luffy! XDD ...I wonder what happened to him.

This is amazing so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I loved this fic so far please update and continue with this!Pllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeee

Nice story.

I loved but could you make an mother one
Like what happened to luffy's nakama

This is so funny! XD

I can't wait for a next chapter.

Stay awesome!

LOL! this story is very amusing.

I love this story it's awesome! Can't wait for Sabo and Robin to enter the scene!

Yay! At last a fic where Dragon is being protective! And Fatherly. Thank you. That one paragraph made my day. _

Ahahahahahahahaha! Are you kidding me?! 'Reverted into a child-child - like state'? SERIOUSLY?! HA!
I hate weaklings! Still one of my fav luffy lines! Ah, and the revo's reaction to it was hillarious! So awesome!

Lol

THATS HOW HE ACTUALLY IS AHAHAHHAHA

SABO YOUR DEAR LITTLE BROTHER NEEDS HELP SO HURRY THE HELL UP AND GET TO HIM YA IDJIT

fell back into a childish mental state? HA! if any thing its the other way around!

I've always wanted to see some interaction between Dragon and Luffy, and you did a really good job on it :) can't wait for more, please continue!
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Woww amazing ! I've always wanted to see a family story between Dragon abd Luffy.
Can't wait for more!

très bonne fanfiction :D
j'aime bien le quiproquo avec la personnalité de Luffy. j'espère qu'un nouveau chapitre arrivera bientôt

bonne continuation