Why is this story in the male ocs\si community ?

I haven't been online in forever! I'm so glad there was an update for one of my favorite TOS fics! I'm so curious about the deal Eden & the exsphere made! I hope this gets updated soon! Keep up the great work!

Damn Eden can’t catch a break.

Not sure how I missed this in my inbox, but I’m loving it. :)

Sheenas disappointment is very cutting isn’t it. And I can feel the crushing anxiety of Eden , too.

Nice. I can see Eden's breaking point coming closer. When you feel that you can't win, you get to a point to just want to screw with the other guys as much as you can.

Hello, i dont have an account, so sorry for this, teehee. I hope you can update this story too because I love Eden, and what you're portraying here in your story is reallt awesome, that's all, thank you for all the awesome stories you've made! :)

I freaking love this story. Eden has really become important to me, and her relationships with the team even more so, so it was really wonderful to see them bring her back with their own willingness to do so. I can't wait to see how this could strengthen their relationship. I'm a LITTLE bumbed that the team won't get to actually see the people in her head lol. cant wait for what you have coming next!

Okay. First off, I’m mostly a silent reader. I never normally review, but this story is just so damn good. I really like Eden as a character, she’s incredibly realistic. No Mary-Sue vibes, it’s great. Now the story. You have followed the main plot quite well but you have also managed to throw your own twists in. Like the laboratory with James and Riven. I don’t know why, but whenever those characters show up I feel my heart jump with exitment. The mystery behind them and their goals are super compelling. I just love reading any of their dialogue. Honestly, at this point, this could be a stand alone novel and not just some fanfic. Also, Eden’s relationship with Sheena, and even Raine recently is just precious. She really has grown from the stuttering Eden we all knew. This story is a masterpiece and I just wanted to show my appreciation. I can’t wait for the next update!

I think this chapter is great. The emotions are real and there was so good character development.

Don’t be nervous updating this! It’s a masterpiece anyone would die to find one that is close to this put no fanfic would ever be as good or nearly as good as this one pe proud of it!

I don't know why, but there's just something so satisfying about this chapter! Then again I am mostly easy to please with stories, but I can't wait to see what's left ahead for Eden and the gang! Hope things go well for ya, and most importantly, have fun!

Exosphere move through the stages of grief... good news maybe?

Now that’s a cliffhanger.

I thought it was pretty good. Nice lengthy chapter.

I think that you're still doing great, as well with the characters.
I don't remember much about the dungeons, so I can't say anything about it, only that I enjoyed reading it!.
And, by the way, it's ultimately up to you. You can do the rewrite if you want, the idea is for you to have fun and enjoy what you write, too!
And, something I should have written at the start: I hope everything gets better over there! And that I've enjoyed your chapter and the almost dark twist there.