are you planning on continuing this is a good story

Don't put Author's Notes in the middle of a sentence in the middle of a chapter. It's quite jarring.
If you honestly feel the need to point something out, just put it in an Author's Note at the end of the page.

Quite the way to start the storyXD

What chapter of which journey is yukia in? Or any chapter with her milf action.

Just use Bulbapedia. It has wikis and walkthroughs. There should be one on every city or landmark.

yeah I can understand that Sarecus... maybe make a Hoenn adventure instead? but that is a year old now too... hmm... but besides it took a few years to make XY, I think there taking time to think on Z or the next series of games... also Soon think of this DPP will have its tenth anniversary in like two/three years so that's probally getting remade as well...

Anime's gone too boring.

Can you add my OC into a story. His name is Spectra he has long black hair, galaxy blue eyes and is six feet tall. He wears a long black leather cloak with a hood a black sleeveless T-shirt, black jeans and black boots. The pokemon on his team are Tyranitar. Dragonite, Raichu, Venesaur, Archanine, and Polirath. They are named in the same order, Toph, Korraka, Thunder, Vines, Blitz, and Aquarius.

I wonder what the problem is?

What is your Facebook name?

Update please.

Update please and thank you.

For a new pokemon for Sarecus to capture, it should be an absol. A female at that one too.

You should make the main character souren.

Would it kill you to actually finish up a story for once? Is it that hard?