SAY, KNOW ANYONE WILLING TO COME UP WITH A STORY BASED ON THIS SHIT?

- 'Beware the Superman' Trope
- Fallen Hero (Malin Rydén)
- Irredeemable (Mark Waid)
- Kingdom Come (Mark Waid)
- Lady Justice (Ken Ogino)
- Marshal Law (Pat Mills)
- Planetary (Warren Ellis)
- Powers (Brian Michael Bendis)
- Rising Stars (J. Michael Straczynski)
- Squadron Supreme (Mark Gruenwald)
- Supreme (Rob Liefeld)
- Supreme Power (J. Michael Straczynski)
- The Boys 2019 (Eric Kripke)
- Watchmen (Alan Moore and Dave Gibbons)

Emphasis on Fallen Hero (Malin Rydén), Irredeemable (Mark Waid), Kingdom Come (Mark Waid), Lady Justice (Ken Ogino) and The Boys 2019 (Eric Kripke).

This fic sucks. It a full Oc type fic. The worst type Naruto fic that exist.

Over all not a bad story. It was an interesting naruto crossover focusing on the naruto world but not the characters. I would give it a 9/10 if not for the horrible and inappropriate use of Japanese suffixes in an English language story.

It’s pretentious to add those suffixes. Equally pretentious is the use of the Japanese words for mother/mon, father/dad and sister/brother etc. Why use those words? A kunai, or other similar words, is a specific object not existing in English. Same with the title of Hokage. Mother, father, sister etc are words that have an English translation and are used profusely. Exchanging these words for their Japanese equivalent is asinine.

Please do not misunderstand. This was a very well written story with a very good plot, character development and dialogue. It’s a good read. The only problem is just a major and quite frankly annoying one. Common sense would dictate that an English language story would use the English language and syntax. However, in today’s world common sense isn’t so common anymore.

#MakeCommonSenseCommonAgain

There is a lot of "eye widening" in this story .

-_- Of course she would be interrupted at the worst time. That is a cliche that I seriously hate .

Hmm... I'm not sure how I feel about Masami at this point.

I expect her to challenge her but I didn't expect this ending.

great story and i loved the twists and turns i myself might have done things a little differently chief among them would have been Naruto altering history in order to re-live his childhood and truly get the family he wanted (maybe an A.U story?) but otherwise loved it and can't wait to read the sequel

i don't mean to point out the obvious but as you already established naruto can use da copa to literally summon people to him so why wouldn't he just summon miki and hanako to him?

that makes no sense if katsumi loses which let's face it we ALL know she will all that will accomplish is giving Odin MORE power why the fuck would they do that? seriously if you think your chances of winning on your own are impossible why would you do EXACTLY that it's just dumb

i'm confused are naruto and the other Magi incapable of using chakra now?

it truly amazes me how fucking stupid the namikaze family is (i don't count naruto in the family as he really isn't) seriously

i kinda feel that the intricate symbols and time ability you took from Doctor Strange but made it blue to fit with Naruto's colour i like it

Hm, I don't really like them training the Konohamaru corps, unless it's just giving them the schedule from Guy and giving them pointers, there's a lot of better things to do for them.
While ironic, it's actually a rather fitting end, especially considering that in a serious confrontation his weapon could be called 'hax'.
Masami seems like a good example of "power corrupts".

Why Didn't Naruto use De Capo?