This should be a series finally movie. It was so realistic!

I enjoyed this quite a bit. Although the finale for Motorcity was good it was also a bit unsatisfying. There were a number of loose ends it didn't manage to tie down before the credits. This fic explored the one I was interested in the most, and didn't gloss over the different, and often less glamorous aspects of leadership and rebuilding of a community.

If anything, the only issue was that it felt too short, especially with the way the chapters were cut. This may have been better as a single short story undivided since it's under 10k words. To be sectioned the way it is it may have needed more fleshing out. But I'm a sucker for lots of details in world-building, and in light of taking a break from To The Stars (PMMM work, 420k words over 33 chapters) my expectations may be a little high.

Good work! I'm glad to see that there are stories worth reading in this section.

Very realistic :)

Again, I really love all the little details you've incorporated into this and the previous story. I'd never really considering exactly how Deluxe and Motorcity would merge into a single city. I also loved the interactions between Julie and Texas, Julie and Dutch, and Julie and Tennie. Too often, those characters get ignored in fanfic.

Cool! A story with Julie running Detroit Deluxe.

I have read this story as well as your previous one and I am quite pleased with both. My only request is this: Could you make a fanfic like this through Mike's perspective and if there is any chance of him and Julie getting together in the sequel?
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Very well written and very interesting. You went the extra mile with writing about life after Kane's fall, something that I can bet everyone sometimes wonders how things would be. Specially for a character like Julie who's life is so conflicted. Overall, you did an amazing job! :)

I like this so far, I enjoyed "Things you aren't supposed to know" so I'm very glad there's a sequel for that! Can't wait to read more and see where you take things. :)