This was the cutest story. I loved Korra, especially, and how she was strong but just kind of melted a bit about Asami and their feelings. I loved it.

Soooo adorable! I CAN'T! My heart! This is perfect! I loved every word! Great job!

u r awesome

Woot! I like it!

Yae! Love the AU it's great, will you make a second chapter or leave it with this one :D?

Great story. However, it seems like you and up creating your own sport lol. You can't pass the ball that many times in American football. You have one person snap the ball the the QB, and the QB can either run the ball or throw it to whoever is receiving. You don't throw it back and forth. Just wanted to let you know if you ever decide to go over this story again. Great job otherwise! I know you didn't know much about the sport lol.

this was ...AMAZING in combination with Kyhu's art I could read this fanfic over and over again ... oh my gosh pls continue or else I'm gonna die xD please :)

OMGOMGOOMG OH MY FUCKiNG GLOB! this iis adorable! can you please continue !? i fucking love ths! please...im on my hands and knees!.000000000000000000000003 :3 plzz

Such an adorable fic! Korra and Asami being so shy around each other is just - /

Nice one! Awesome Fic!

Sooooooooo sweeeeeet and kind! I almost puke rainbows! Jajajaja like like

This was so beautiful I loved it

Argh this story was so cute and adorable i just loved it. I took a bit of a hiatus from korra and missed season 2 & half of season 3, but i'm back now and i'm loving these two characters together. It's a nice AU idea, and i think one you definitely make work. I just love how they're both equal in their relationship, but they each bring something unique to it.
So yea, loved the story and the writing, i see you've written a few other pieces i might have to check out now :)

OMG! U should totally make another story like this

Awwwwwww is all I can say. It's too cute

I really like where this story is going and I hope you keep up the good work :)

I also feel like there is room for improvement. I hope I don't sound too much like a grammar Nazi, especially since my grammar isn't perfect. Something you could work on is your sentence structure. I think you use too many of these ";". I don't remember what they're called. They make your sentences run on a little too long. You also use commas the same way. Don't be afraid to use short sentences. For example:
Instead of saying "It'd be the sixth, they won four games and lost one; she had to win this one."
Consider saying "It was the sixth game they played so far. They won four games and lost one. She had to win this one."

I would recommend reading your story over and looking for sentences with more than one comma and sentences with those ";". Another thing I found was that you also over use italics just a little. I just like reviewing with constructive criticism because I would want someone to to it for me. I'm not trying to trash your story or anything. I think It's awesome. Just go over it and do some editing.

I also think that I should let you know that cheerleaders need to keep their bodies in tip top shape. At the beginning of the story, Asami says that fifty crunches is a lot. While that would be a lot for me, it would not be for a cheerleader. Two of my house mates are in my university's cheerleading team. They go to the gym daily to keep themselves in shape. I also remember meeting someone in my summer camp that used to teach gymnastics. In terms of difficulty, cheerleading ranks higher than gymnastics because it is judged and because there is a lot more coordination involved. The person told me that warm up exercises included doing a lap around campus (our university, like many others, is huge), 200 push-ups ans 200 sit-ups... The fact that he wasn't exaggerating scares me.

Once again, I really like the idea for this story. It's really cute. Thanks for writing it :)