Wow, this is so wonderfully in character that I'm actually speechless. More please? Onegaishimasu! *_*

This one's impressive. I like how you portrayed the bond between the Turks and also how you wrote about how both girls were captured. Hands down as all characters were (IMHO) in character too. :)

I like the way you've woven the story around the events of the game, and the idea that Heidegger is indirectly still trying to bump off the remaining Turks. And who wouldn't like to be in Elena's position at the end of the last scene...! Nice work.

Headcanon accepted! I love being able to read fics that go more in depth on the untold side of established scenes in games. Very well written!