nice

A little but after every thing they went through they deserved a little sappiness. Edward seems to be headed for some peace Adam may soon be a bit more happier because his "Children"

are happy. Jessie and Shal I don't know what is going to happen with them I don't mind seeing them as a couple though.

Love is multilayered especially in situations like the Mutant X family. It isn't always easy to label and identify.

Adam seems the easiest though they are his children and he would do anything for their future happiness.

Anyway great job I enjoyed it.

I liked it very much and though it took me on a rollar coaster of emotions, it reminded me that everyone is human and we all have those kinds of emotions now and then. It was refreshing to be taken on such an emotional adventure. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

y can't u later on in this story put it as BS not EB i don't like the thing about EB. brennan and shalimar make a good couple not emma and brennan!EJ

loved the emotions you wrote them out very well...the little jokes and true display of love was great you made these two chracters sing and dance. hope you write more Bren &Emma fics!

like it

I just read this fic and I had to tell you that this was brilliant probably the best fic I have ever read, you expressed their emotions wonderfully. I hope you write more fics in the future, whether it is for mutant x or another show.

This fic was perfect especially for a Brennan/Emma fan.

Great Job

your story is the best. i'm not an e/b fan but your story stir me up. BRAVO! you inspired me

I liked it ... sortta :P

I liked the Brennan & Shalimar parts the best. i think they are ment to each other !

please do a jesse and shalimar sequel i love them together

Two words: So amazing. thank you for writing this story and posting it.

WOW Fan81981, you really did a fantastic job writting this Fan Fiction. I have enjoyed reading it from the begining, right up to the very end. I think that you made the characters...characters lol in your story very believeable, and captured how they were feeling etc very well. Gald that Brennan and Emma admitted their feelings for eachother, and finally were together.

Great Story :)

PS Yea I reckon you should write another fic, you are a good writer.

Hi !

Great end !

You almost made me cry !

Hope you will contionue to write another Brennan / Emma stories !

See you soon

Megara

very good. And I would love to read something else. But I am a very loyal person, so even though I love your writing I don't read anything that isn't B/E

Great ending to a great story I can't wait to read more of your writing.