WAIT.
WHAT'S THIS END. WHAT'S THIS SEE YOU LATER. I'M SCARED.
Also, I really enjoyed your story. I didn't expected that kind of ending at all, I'm sad about HIccup and Merida being gone. Why is Hiccup gone ? Culpability ? Shame ? I'm so sad about him and Merida never getting to live their story. But still, I had a good time, thank you for that !

That's a cruel ending... Poor hiccup, it feels incomplete... Merida is gone, Hiccup is either dead or gone and nobody seems to care, there's no sequel, its not satisfying at all. It feels rushed and weak. I liked the story but the ending is disappointing

oh my god ! this is so cute im gonna pee pee poo poo i loooooove the breakfast club keep writing never stop i love you follow me on instagram satanchain and 3

I’m seriously crying at this ending. I need a f*cking sequel T-T

JACK SHIPS DRARRY!

JACK SHIPS DRARRY!

WHAT?! NOOOOO! WHAT HAPPENED TO HICCUP?! ARE THEY NEVER GONNA MEET AGAIN? WHAT ABOUT MERICUPP!? but most importantly WHO CUT THE BRAKES?! IS THERE A SEQUEL?!

WHAT?! NOOOO! THAT CANT BE IT! WHAT HAPPENED TO HICCUP?! ARE THEY EVER GOING TO MEET AGAIN?! IS THERE A SEQUEL? But most importantly WHAT HAPPENED TO HICCUP!

What!? That was it!? I don’t like to be a negative reviewer but... that was a little bit of a lazy ending. I was so into this. I’d love it if you could rewrite the last chapter and finish. We need to see the four together again. You can’t have a climax like that and call it the ending. Please finish!

I'm not gonna be too mean like the other reviewers, but I will say I'm fairly disappointed in the last chapter. All of your other chapters were enjoyable and cute and funny, and I really thought that in the end Rapunzel would convince Merida's family to stay, and they would find out who tampered with the brakes, and why Tooth and Rapunzel had been so cold to each other.
This didn't give me much answers, but I understand how hard it is to write a suitable ending when you are no longer interested in a story. I am not trying to be rude, I'm trying to be critical. This really was an amazing story. It deserves my Favourite :) but the ending wasn't the best.

WHAT HAPPENED TO HICCUP?!

I actually like this ending very much, but will there ever be a sequel ? There are just so many unresolved things... Anyways it was a great great story

Oh my stars, you have no idea how much I want to write in this review.
I want to thank you a thousand times because this fangs was so utterly FANTASTIC. Don't you roll your eyes at me and shrug it off. I am not lying. I only review if I finish the story (it's usually completed) and it was GREAT. there are not enough positive adjectives to describe how I feel about your story. Holy crap this was beautiful and I thank you so much for writing this because I am such a huge Jackunzel shipper. I despise Jelsa with every cell that makes up my body. (To all Jelsa shippers: it really doesn't work. Ice and more ice is not a good thing. But the moon and the sun...also Elsa is fine with being alone. Jack spent CENTURIES trying to be noticed).
I also want to just SQUEAL bc this was so great.
I also want to YELL BECAUSE SO MANY EMOTIONS MY HEART HAS BEEN STABBED AND IT LETTING OUT THE NONREGULATED BLOOD. what does that sentnce even mean.
Keep on writing. You're so great it.
Don't let your Memes be dreams
Catcha on the flipside ;)

I am disapointed. Everything was so nicely done and then you just slamed the ending in a clear "Whatever I have better things to do" way. Is so hushed and confused it ruined the story! The ending is always the best part of a history, just throwing whatever in your ending is Rude
*Sigh*
Whatever, I have other stuff to read... Maybe next time I will lower my expectations...

My heart. I love this story and thank you!