| Reviews for Brotherband Chronicles: The Stones of Mnesomyne |
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Hazel Noble chapter 12 . 8/12 Thank You |
PeanutButter chapter 3 . 12/12/2019 First off, I LOVED the first book. It was EPIC. Rick would wonder why he hadn't thought of it. Very well written. Second off, I am heartbroken by the fact that you will not be completing the books. Third, WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO PERCY!? You are mean. |
ItsJustABook chapter 2 . 12/2/2017 Also ima just emphasize that the ending ended how it should’ve. It was perfect. You were setting it up the whole time and it wouldn’t have been as honestly beautiful of an ending had you not chosen this ending. |
ItsJustABook chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 The amount of emotion you managed to convey is also incredible. You had what best selling books managed to do. You make the reader connect to the characters and feel their emotions and sympathize with them. And when you killed em off. You killed them in a way that I personally expected and I think most people did. But you still managed to surprise everyone with the ending and how beautiful it was. Also when you killed them instead of leaving everyone heartbroken you made it a perfect, not happy per say, but maybe more bittersweet and it was just perfect. The whole story was perfect. The only complaint I could have that could be classified as nitpicking is how they reacted to Luke’s death. but then it could be explained because they knew he would die (prophecy) and maybe they’d seen a lot of their men die. |
ItsJustABook chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 Your an amazing writer and the ending was a perfect sad ending. Not something you see often. Also you amazingly balanced out Annabeth and Percy’s skills. I’m not the hugest fan of Annabeth but I can aknowledge she is a badass. You balanced Percy and Annabeth with Percy while still keeping Percy as the strongest and on the pedestal he is meant to be on. This has made its way into on of my favorite stories of all time. |
RedHeadReader22 chapter 12 . 12/27/2016 This was beautiful. Thank you. The ending while sad, was wonderful. It ended the way it should have. You're an amazing author, I had to stop reading several times and simply stare in awe at how perfectly you captured a scene. I've read this story since you published the first chapter and I'm so happy that I stayed with it until the very end. I look forward to reading whatever you write next. Thank you again for writing a story so perfect. You made Rick proud. |
EzioAuditoreV chapter 12 . 8/19/2016 That got me man, that got me. Read both your stories, you're an amazing writer, this gave me goosebumps, what an amazing ending. Kudos to you. |
Rey chapter 12 . 7/23/2016 I'm crying, as that was one of the most beautifully written stories in existence. So much power and emotion and energy packed in. And the plot was wonderful as well. Much love, Rey. |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/20/2016 What have you done with my heart, everyone diesss? |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/19/2016 I have an idea. Maybe we can help you; we write a chapter for you and you make it more uniquely you. We have been reading and adoring your writing for a while, we should be able to, well enough for our purposes, imitate it. It won't be as good as the original writing, but it's worth a shot, right? I just personally think that it would give me and many others that peace of mind that comes from finishing a book. (Everyone reads this and goes "Whaaa? Was there such a thing?" Anyway, what do you think? ~ A devoted fan P.S. Your writing is awesome! |
Sunny chapter 12 . 5/21/2016 To whoever wrote this Hi I am Sunny and I am your biggest fan I read the former book as well Your 'fan fiction' was the greatest fan fiction I ever read You adopted the characters and made them yours, and I think yours was the best fan fiction I read my whole life Yours was the perhaps the best ending to a story that I ever read Although Rick Riordan is an epic writer, I think you are too So, whoever you are, please keep on writing, and I hope I can read more of your stories when you are an independent writer yourself |
King of Sparta chapter 12 . 4/15/2016 Rushed |
IMakeTheMonsters chapter 12 . 3/28/2016 as upset as I am that you didn't continue, the ending was worth it. so absolutely worth it. wow. You have my utmost respect as a writer. |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/19/2016 I just realized how smart this plotline was. You wrote this ending though the eyes of someone thats seen both sides. But even through it you were neutral about it. We are humans. War is inevitable. We end ourselves. You never tried to make us readers hate the british, but we still ended up hating them anyways. Its just amazing. I dont even understand how you managed to do that. And even though this story ended, the last chapter is so good that i'm not even mad. Its a million times better than the Rick Riordan's ending. Im glad you wrote it. |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/19/2016 OMG CALYPSO DIED! THANK THE GODS :D please keep her that way ;) |