Reviews for The Vortex
Guest chapter 8 . 10/22/2019
Continue it
xcz639 chapter 9 . 2/25/2019
The fans of naruto The writer fan of naruto but everyone knows power level of ki 1.000.000 its speed 100x Faster than the speed of light so goku and vegeta an base as 10-100 times Faster than the speed of light 10% uesd power kill all naruto losers vers
vegeta can Vaporize them at the speed of light before they try to move so no no and no
stop this shit
TheJSmooth chapter 2 . 8/10/2018
Come on really? That's lame dude lol why take away their powers? Not cool
Vento Aureo chapter 9 . 5/23/2018
This was a pretty good story.
Geets4xj9 chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
Like ur story Keep up the good work no matter how many trashtalkers there (exept
For the constructive critisizers) we'll support your back. dont u dare stop da story
IrishSpirit chapter 1 . 4/15/2018
I'm liking the story so far and I'd like to read how it turns out. Just check you're spelling and grammar please when you update. Other than that, it's a great story and hope you update soon
Guest chapter 8 . 2/5/2018
Plz continue bro
Guest chapter 8 . 2/3/2018
I liked the story. Please release another chapter
Nalu2017 chapter 8 . 11/15/2017
Please Continue
HansSkorpion chapter 8 . 11/9/2017
Interesante historia, espero la continĂșes!
guest2 chapter 8 . 9/17/2017
I'm still enjoying the story so I hope you can update soon and I don't think Gohan has an opposite espically when it comes to the colour of clothes. The only one is Boruto but you know he's not born yet unless you make him be naruto's twin brother and make Gohan wear clothes similar to his style.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/14/2017
Why are you so stupid?
ahuvati chapter 8 . 4/14/2017
Yo! I'm interesed!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/4/2017
hello I'm animelov3r1 and I would like to read more of ur chapters of this story please, I really enjoy reading them, thank you!
zekbolt55 chapter 8 . 12/28/2016
please rewrite
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