why must you make sasuke evil and strong not reading this more as it is ruined to much hate in story

it sucks. I hate it that naruto helps sasuke. this is crap

U are a damn good writer and your stories are nice so yeah u probably won’t see this but good luck!

That was good. I like it. Grat jop on the story.

This is why I hate stories these days. People always add so many time skips and with them so close to each other.. It's depressing..

You should have added a scene where it shows Yoda training Luke on Davobah then suddenly sneezes, saying something more cryptic after Luke asks what's wrong Master Yoda, after Naruto said Yoda's famous words, "Do or do not, there is no try"

Great chapter and plot

You will be sorely missed by me And I loved this how you wrote it so I might not read someone else's add on rewrite wish you luck and hope to see any story from you in the future

That is one dysfunctional family.

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that's so sad. GOODLUCK MISTER YOU CAN DO IT!

Tsunade is hashirama's granddaughter so that means either tsunade is naruto's daughter or naruto has a brother or sister

Well my good sir good luck with your future and I hope for the best

may your storys go to good homes hopefully you write a actual book i have enjoyed what youve written may you go far random-san

The old got to follow my dream excuse. Just another chump who couldn't handle the pressure. What a cat.

While its always sad to see good authors stop writing I can't fault you for following your dream job good luck and God speed