What happened? I'm craving more of this story but it seems like you've discontinued it. Please update soon

Could tou maybe continue this? I really love it

Some nice descriptions, right from the outset of this chapter. I really eat up descriptive scenes. They're my favourite, mainly because they really aid the readers' interpretation of the story and allow them to visualise what's going on. You've done this fantastically, because visual descriptions were neither overdone nor underdone. As the Goldilocks would say, just right!

Jason's reaction to homework is exactly like mine. In fact, I am procrastinating at this very moment.

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading about the Traught development (even though I'm a Spitfire girl myself), as well as her heart-warming interactions with the Batfamily. A bit of a shame that this hasn't been updated since 2013, but life does catch up most times and I understand how hard it can be to keep persisting with a story. Thanks for writing!
-misspandalily

- Dramatic irony is real. You've pretty much hit the mark, Artemis!
- Practically guffawed when Mr Grayson multiplied her hourly salary by 15. She was so adorable when she was shocked, seriously.
- Oh, wait. I feel like I was wrong with the salary bit. Maths was never my strong point, anyway. The point is that I found that particular part hilarious!
- Of course, there's that bittersweet element when it comes to introducing the Batfamily. So many orphans in one room.
- Flustered/nervous Artemis seems almost warranted, given the sheer enormity of the BatManor. I think your portrayal was quite effective, and it was clear that you were trying your best to express Artemis' thoughts are fluidly as possible without seeming too forced.

Great job! It wasn't boring at all. :)
-misspandalily

Very nice! You established the premise early on, which was nice to read. I could understand which direction the fic would be heading in, and also it's tone, your voice, as well as the characteristics of each person in the story. I see you've done the fantastic superhero-modern civilian contrasting as well. Great!

Thanks for writing!
-misspandalily

UPDATE THE STORY!
I MUST FIND OIT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Update soon!

Amazing job so far!
Update soon!

Please continue with this!
I really like it so far!
Update the story?

I always just pronounced it as Ra-us because that's the Arabic word for head رأس

This story is grate can't wait for the next chapter

PLZZZZZ CONTINUE ! c: DICK AND ARTY ARE SOOOOOOOOOO CUTE TOGETHER ;D :3

TRAUGHT
I love it. The hide-and-seek was fun to read and I love your narrative. It's really engaging and relatable. Great job!

KORRA KORRA KOOORRRRRAAAA. LEGEND OF KORRA. FOR LIFE. KORRA. KORRA. KORRA. YES. YIPPEE.

OH ALSO I READ EVERYTHING. EVERY SINGLE PART OF IT. ALL OF YOUR STORIES.

BAI FOR NOW.

Fantastic chapter! I look forward to the next chapters.

I love this! Plz continue!

Please update!