rip in restk dolcetto

what i think?

i think i can already hear the exclamations, demanding where the coveted goat juice is.

I've read this fic several times and 31 is my favorite chapter.

I finally read this whole thing and I want to say thank you! Reading this was just an amazing journey. I love the characters, the dialogue, the interactions, and your storytelling! You brought life into every character, adding humor and of course real human moments and weaving everything into a beautiful story. I'm just going to hop over and check more of your writing once I'm done writing this comment. From the bottom of my heart, thank you letting me, and many others be a part in this journey. I love this fic!

Always wanted these two to meet. This is gonna be fun!

SLKDFJLKSDJFLKJDSLKJ OHMG
poor Roa! it really was bound to happen with how he never opens his eyes
I guess he's lucky that it may be fixable
but srysly these Chapterlets are amazing
love love love your writing!

LDFJLKDSJFLKJDSL LMFAO! I'd forgotten how hilarious this particular chapter was! I literally can't stop laughing, a-mazing.

i think the best part is the carbonated water bit, Greed's reaction is just kdjflkdsjflkjdslk

(i would have posted this on ch1 but apparently, I did that already) you know, I was just thinking of this story the other day, and damn its just as good as I remember! seriously this is one of the rare stories that really stuck with me, mostly because of the hilarious moments I know are to come. The characterization of Greed and the gang has always been amazing and I just love the way you write Mary! love love LOVE this fic!

I don't know if you're coming back. But if you ever return, I'm interested to see where you take this story. And even more interested in how you portray Ling and the second Greed.

And to keep this story up for 58 chapters...that takes some dedication. Impressive.

I read and read and read again this pure wonder and slowly lose hope... Will there be another chapter ?

this fic was really fun to read! I couldn’t stop reading this even though I had a 7:30 class by the next day. Honestly, I got so hooked to this story and this was all I could think about while waiting for class haha.

Roa is "ROW-ah" and Dolcetto is "dole-CHET-toe" or maybe "dole-CHET-oh"

haha idk if ur active on here at all anymore, but i randomly remembered this fic yesterday and just reread it all! i think i actually started reading from when u uploaded the first chapter which..wow that was a long time ago. anyways yeah it was nice to reread a fic that use favorite of mine, it brought back a lot of old memories lol

and i hope ur doing good!

Thank you for writing this

So, I don't know if you're still active here and will see this, seeing as the last chapter was released quite a while ago. Just wanted to say I've followed this fanfic since chapter 34? Or somewhere around there... I remember this (despite unfinished) story as dearly (can you even say that...?) as I remember the two anime adaptations and the manga. You did a fantastic job working through all characters and you kept (still keep) entertaining me every time I read a chapter no matter if it's the first time or not. Your character Mary felt (feels) so real and ralatable it happens that I at times forget she's actually not a canon character. I love how you made all the characters slowly grow and you can really feel how the story takes its time (in every way ;) ) to move forward and it's something you don't often see in fanfics, however you cover this absolutely flawlessly and as a hobby reader it is amazing to see and have the opportunity to read this mini-masterpiece. Greed, Mary and the CO will forever have a place in my memory and association with FMA. I honestly can't tell you how I really feel about this since I myself am rather confused. I love this story for what it is, and even though I'm honestly really sad about the thought of this story never getting a proper ending, it's with fondness I look back at it and always keep a tab on my phone's internet browser open with this page, this story, latest chapter up.

So all in all, thank you so much for this entertainment. I hope you're having a nice life! 3