Reviews for Perfection
Spellflame chapter 5 . 7/16
... his brain was rebuilt in reverse while active...
Sonia25 chapter 4 . 3/17
This ff is so slow that I fall asleep reading it and ofcourse harry has to bow to dumbledor 's wishes that is why I find ff so annoying even after knowing he is not the man he potrays
dogdog99099 chapter 8 . 1/28
please update this book its extremely good and I cant wait for the next chapters its one of the best harry potter books out there
attacktitan100 chapter 3 . 9/14/2019
they way 'arry speaks doesnt show maturity rather his childishness.
unlike P. stone incident , here they were clueless over the CoS.
not wanting to visit healer when he doesnt know effets of basilisk is stupid
FanFicKing3245 chapter 4 . 8/31/2019
Ok I know I’m late to this but I just have to point this out. Earlier in this chapter Harry is exploring the 7th floor with his new wand. There is then a flashback where we see how he got this wand. The flashback ends with Harry sleeping in Helena’s room without ever going to the 7th floor. So how was he there with his new wand earlier in the chapter?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/28/2019
The cloak capable of hiding from death itself can be seen through by ghosts. Really.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
I'm sad you made Harry as retarded as could possibly be in this story so far.
I mean, really, entering the chamber like that AND NOT EVEN HAVING YOUR WAND IN HAND? Dumbass.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/23/2019
This has been a great story!

I have read a few other stories where due to events in the Chamber Harry is altered but by far, but you have given it a wonderful edge with Helena and Rowena. I really like the story flow and development of the Harry and Rowena's relationship.

Hopefully you found a muse or at least a good beta to help you continue the story. I am sure I am not the only one looking forward to seeing where you take it!

Thank you!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/18/2018
please write later i love the Harry development and i love this fic after another chapter for pity?
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 6 . 6/5/2018
Why harry didnt give the diadem to rowena?
And in previous chapter, harry got bored because he already read his school book, why harry didnt read the book he found in abandoned class,?
Faery66 chapter 7 . 1/28/2018
Hope to read more soon.

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5HAD0W chapter 8 . 1/10/2018
Any update?
Guest chapter 8 . 12/27/2017
you said that you reudapt this story, i hope that you continue this fiction is my favorite i love a Harry intelligent and rowena and lady grey are cool i hope to see the end of this fanfiction or a new chapter? maybe as a gift for Christmas pleeeeeeeeeaaaaase?
Melikalilly chapter 7 . 12/15/2017
I love this story
guenaelle chapter 8 . 12/7/2017
i hope you don't give up this storry.
this story is my favorite, a new chapter please?
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