This chapter is perfection

could you do some more characters please update soon

You have such a talent in writing dialogue in "the voice" of the character. A lot of fics I've read has the conversation standard. You use the he vocabulary and cadence to reflect the character so well. Really enjoyed reading these. Thanks.

I was wondering if you could briefly return to this and do another Grunt, but with a focus on Liara. I always found it cute how infatuated he was with her.

Could you do some more characters? I would like to see the rest of the crew could you do Jacob or Thane next please

You probably have your own plans for continuation here, but I just realized that it would be awesome to get one of these for EDI, when she takes over the Cerberus infiltrator robot and makes it her own. Anyways, love the work you do and very much looking forward to any of your next updates!

(posted here since i already left a review on Ch. 18)

Great story

Good stuff I say

I love it. Great interaction, between all

Awesome chapter. Very nice, all the girl talk, the comradery.

This is such a wonderful expansion and exploration of some very awesome moments in my favorite game. I don't know if you are still considering ideas or writing new chapters, but I think taking a look at Steven Hackett would be awesome! Thanks again for writing such a wonderful story.

Bray doesn't actually move immediately to do as Shepard ordered. In the game he explicitly looks at Aria to make sure it's okay. She doesn't look back, nor does she say anything to countermand it; if she had an issue with it she would have made some sort of acknowledgement.

This is such a neat side story to Better Angels! I'd love to see more! Something EDI-ish is always fun. ;)

Aw I also bought Spectre stuff to Liara in the first Mass Effect. The good stuff was reserved for her ;)

This is just so darn good! The banter between Liara, Shepard, and Karin is so light and funny. Totally refreshing! Eventho poor Shepard IS in the doghouse! LOL