more please.

happy valentines day... even though this is a day late. keep goin and stay golden

The story wasn't free of mistakes. I saw at least one typo. I probably missed some more mistakes myself.
Right now I'm trying to find something else that I didn't like from this story, or something I can fault you for. I'm not finding it.
For the good, well, I did only find one mistake that I can recall. You've got good descriptive text. I was never lost in time or space while reading this lovely little one-shot. The story flows great and your sentences are very well structured. I liked the length, too. I didn't find that the story repeats itself either, or that there was any lack of emotions anywhere in the story (trust me, I felt the feels).
In reference to what you said in the A/N, I think fluff is a plausibility. Why couldn't it happen? While on the topic, I want to say that the fluff in this story was great. Few stories I've read have reached this level of desire satisfying fluff. The feels I felt were just what I seek in a good White Rose one-shot.
In short, I loved it. Keep up the good work.

TCR

Right in the feels.

Great story, love the begining with Weiss's opinion of the poem, I was laughing for quite sometime.

I know this is a late review, but I wanted to say that I enjoyed it nonetheless.

f'ing A your better at this then me. -_- Good work man/lady really well done, really strong flow and wording, my greatest weakness . still no joke really liked it.

I love your writing style, and I think this should be read by more White Rose fans. I had no idea until I read it, actually. I thought that it would another one of those OCxWeiss type of fics, but I skimmed it anyway in hopes of it being a RxW and I was not dissapointed. Anyway, my point was, you made my day, thanks dude! \(v)/

PS. You should put up characters in the description. ;)

*slow clapping, going to a crescendo*

Wow, this was adorable! I loved it! Very well written and the characters were great. :) Not only that, but Yang in a dress and Blake in a tux?! Woah! I really want to see that now. XD

Well, I have almost no words except for: That was fantastic. Something about your writing style in this really enveloped me a lot more than I'm accustomed to. To be honest I kind of felt like I was experiencing all of the same emotions that Weiss was throughout it all. If you ever decide that you want to make another Ruby/Weiss (or Blake/Yang) fic, by all means don't hesitate :P

This line sold it, the rest of the fic was amazing but "rabbits in blanket" just sold it with a movie deal and star actors.