Personally, I never got the whole age gap problem. My mom's friend and her husband have a thirteen year age gap and all has been well...

Awsome! I dont mind being ur beta reader, if u still need 1.

I really wished there was more story to read! Great story so far. I bet Sai asked Obito to get Naruto next so Naruto wouldn't worry to much about Sai. Bookmarking this story to check up on it!

Aren't sasuke and Hitachi brothers
Just saying

Ekkkkkkkkkk Ekkkkkkkkkk
Go sakura its your birthday your awesome
*Start dancing like a crazy person*
*See naruto upset expression*
* Stops in her tracks*
I am so sorry, naruto. *He sobbed onto my shoulder*
Uhm Sai Sai help please.
*He appears and drags naruto off me and we all live happily ever after. At least I did*

I think you posted the same sentence twice.
Hahaha glad to know I'm not the only person to do it but ps I think my blunder was worse. I copied a hold paragraph but copied it into the wrong story.
I got a lot of comments on that

Is the mizukage a girl or boy. Is this after the 4 great war or what. I'm confused.

More! Love the story, but I want more... Please?

you really need to update this! please, please, please, please, please!

Lol you need to update when you can its a great story and hate to see it left unfinished

If you ever have bad news Sai definitely isn't the person you should have deliver it

Awesome chapter! I wonder who it is.

Can't wait for more.

Thanks

I don't get it well. I'm confused about Obito. Is he he's older self here or the younger one...or both?

That was... a little bit unexpected :P

Yea! About time :-(

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks