Oh my gods. This is truly amazing. It's beautiful, and I can NOT express everything in one reveiw. It's perfect grammar, and while the concept has been used a lot, was one of the best ones of the idea I've read so far. I am tearing up, cause the only other relationships that can be as devastating as this Romeo and Juliet, or Hazel and Augustus. Because Nico is head-over-heels in love, and you can't stop that. He came stop it. And to have the biggest crush, wait not even crush, but fully IN LOVE is the worst thing to ever happen. And Nico keeps going on and on, with his heart crushed everytime. You, young sir or madame, are amazing for writing this. Its awesome, and beautiful, and made me start to cry. You NEVER EVER EVER stop writing, you hear? Cause you're amazing, and beautiful.

This is very well written. :)

poor Nico...

This is perfect. Poor Nico. My heart goes out to him.

This is a perfect representation of what I think Nico has been going through and gods it hurts. My heart breaks for Nico. Good job.

that was deep realy realy deep

FEELS THESE ARE MY FEELS YOU ARE KILLING

Oh my gods... Is that a tear?

(((( poor Nico. The story changed my point of view. good job.

I think I might cry.

You wrote a beautiful story.

This is great!

Extremely powerful. Thanks.

My heart was broken while reading HoH. Now it's powdered...Such a good story, you conveyed Nico so well! TAT I feel for Neeks!

So sad...

I like Nico, and for him to feel the pain of unrequited love along with all the other crap he went through - well, I feel for him. This isn't about him being gay (I support him even then; I know some people are quite upset with RR putting the issue of homosexuality in the books, but applaud him for having the guts to do so), it's about him falling in love with someone he knows he can never have.

When will the children of Hades ever get a break? Hitler, Bianca, now Nico... All tragic.

So sad...

All I can say is damn that was really good.