But damn! That how you draw a reader in! Was browsing for a new indulgence and I think I just found it

I'm so disappointed in Miharu's mom...

Awesome chapter please update again soon i can't wait to read the next chapter please hurry I really want to know what happens next.

Awesome! More please!

I cried reading this chapter. You’re an amazing writer

I get that she's scared but... Can she PLEASE stop being a crybaby? I mean.. Jeez.. She's turning into such a whiner. And a spoilt brat. "I don't want this!" "I don't want that!" "I just want this!"

I get that she wants to go home, I do, but the fact that she's all "I'm upset, and losing my mind, so I'll cut my wings off because this is real!" just because she wants something she can't have anymore.. It's annoying as hell. Please. Just make her grow up? Take responsibility for once? Don't get me wrong, I get she had a really bad life, and she refused to cry (which I commend her for), but come on... She WISHED for someone to love her for who she is. Her wish came true. She's no longer weak, she can stand up for herself now, she can face her fears without letting them get to her (like she did before), she has amazing friends and now she's suddenly a crybaby. How many people, who have been in similar experiences, want to be stronger, to be able to face their demons (no pun intended), and she's just whining about it? Be at least a LITTLE grateful for the fact she has something so many similar people want.

Don't get me wrong... I love the story! But, the fact that she's turned into a crybaby after being a strong woman (for someone so young)... I honestly want to slap some sense into her and just say "Get over it! This is you now! There's NOTHING you can do to change it! You're not human! You're NOT weak, you're a half-demon (born from a Celestial Maiden, the reincarnation of Midoriko AND now a nine tailed fox), whom someone MUCH OLDER has sacrificed themselves for, so get over yourself and face reality! As much as you want to go back, you CAN'T! You're NOT human. You CANNOT go back to how things were before! You go back, you'll be taken in by scientists and get experimented on, or you'll get killed! So, STOP CRYING and acting like a little brat, woman up and take responsibility for yourself! Crying will get you NOWHERE!"

Sorry, I just had to rant about her. It was building up every time she complained about her 'new' life. Other than that... She's a really good character, just lessen the whining crybaby moments, please? It's all just grating on my nerves. (I'm well aware that I'm late with this review)

As Sesshomaru stated a story should have an end. Please continue this story.
Thank you for writing.

...this almost made me cry! very well written

Great story, update soon!

I'm sure you know who this is. PM this account when you get this.

I'm confused, in chapter one Takahashi was bullying her and now they're in love? Are there two that are brothers?

I just re-read all the chapters up to this point. All that revising paid off. :)
Please update soon!

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I really love this story!
It's really deep and moving and sad and just ...️
But when are we gonna see some more Sesshomaru Rue action
And when's next chapter

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Oh my gosh! Your writing is possibly the best one I've read yet! The characterizations are perfect and so is the description (detail)! Please, please, PLEASE update more often! I can't wait to read what happens next!