A great story so far, I hope to see more of it.

Very fun chapter. Clearly written by a fan who knows the subject matter. I particularly like the parts where it is discussed in a relatively easy way how no one understands or knows Spiderman’s True identity. That was precious. Terribly sad that this was the last chapter. I would’ve like to see more character development.

Really love this concept for a plot. I actually read something similar years ago with a female protagonist as Spiderman. It was a lot of fun to read about the gender bender along with the secret identity. Adding the X-Men aspect only mAmes this more enticing. Wonderful job adding in the Tony Stark reference. Really helps with the world building.

Please update soon

Pretty good so far. I like how you’ve written Piper, and I like where the story is going so far. I only have one gripe and a little bit of confusion, though it’s nothing major. My gripe is how many hero’s you’ve introduced into the story so quickly (Over ten I think). I just want Piper to get to the X-Mansion and let the drama ensue. As for my confusion, how has New York mistaked Piper for a Spider-“Man”. Even if she doesn’t stop to talk with people, her figure would be a giveaway.
Anyway, really like the story so far and will look forward to future updates...
...Archangel Writings

Amazing! ;) :)

Update

I would so love to read more of this and hope that you update it again soon because it sounds really interesting so far.

Can we just hv a chappie where Tony comes to the mansion himself to check on Piper?! Thn gt into an argument about his rights with Logan...hv Piper defend Tony and be all like..." Logan that's my father your talking to, so I'd suggest for you to choose your next words wisely. I haven't seen you since I was 8 and now you come in here on the word of May and rip me away from my life with Tony...Midtown...my friends...and my aunt. I know you have your reservations on some things, but don't pretend to KNOW what is best for me when you don't even KNOW me." ... Put Logan in his place!

this is wonderful and u have to continue it. plz plz plz. this story is great there is drama, and I'm sure there'll be drama in further chapters. oh u should make a love triangle around piper. maybe with Cyclops, Nova, and Bobby.

Please write more XD

dang it they were soooo close to finding out piper was spidey!

XD *I remember him being taller* cracks me up

Hi you haven't updated in awhile and I hope you do. Looking forward to next chapter, and good luck.

I hope you can update soon, for the story has peak my interest. LITERALLY.