Love this whole story

What a journey this was! I liked the emotion and vulnerability they both showed. Also very much enjoyed the Mark story. Overall a great fic.

this is a great story. reminds me of liam neeson in taken when he was interrogating peopl

excellent story I love it please write more like this one

I absolutely loved this story. I would love to read a sequel to it. Thanks

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I hope Cassidy gets hit by a truck and tucker gets ate by a shark. I Kant stand those two. I luv the story buy the way .

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This story was AMAZING u had a couple of typos but that's ok...u ended it perfectly...it was fairly realistic, but fantasystill...AMAZING...write more e and o u have some true talent,GOOD LUCK...:)

Another fantastic story well done I liked most of it... Idea for a story a series of 1 shot,s were E & O are newly dating and can not keep there hands off each other so they resort to doing it in any place they can find...

you deserve an award lol...i so needed for this to happen...but i guess only in my dreams and in fanfiction

Wow, I loved that all except Lewis trying to rape Elliot, that was just awkward. Other than that I loved it all. Thanks for posting.

OMG THIS IS THE GREATEST FANFIC EVER WRITTEN! IM IN LOVE THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR THIS!

First let me say you did a phenomenal job writing this amazing story!As for the Bensidy bull shit,it will ALWAYS remain BULL SHIT!What sickens me the most that a whole lot of people knew that the relationship with Olivia and Brian was non-existent,so let me point out some more facts for them.(1)The only difference between David Hayden and Brian Cassidy DUMPING Sergeant Benson is that David dumped her in a bar and Brian Dumped her on the street!(2)I did not like David either but if I had to choose between him and Brian I would go with Hayden because David ONLY trade her off because of his job,while Brian's didn't really have an excuse,Olivia wanted a family and Brian could not even answer her questions about wanting kids with her,and the worse part is that Brian Cassidy ONLY told Olivia that he loved her AFTER he DUMPED they were in a long term relationship,why the fuck did he not tell her he loved her during the so call good times between them and did it last minute at the ending of the sham of a relationship?What relationship?It was BULL!Thanks for posting,your story is wonderful.(NO STOPPING EO!)

make Cassidy leave

OMG, first off, your story is awesome, but what made me HAVE to review was the bit at the end there about how Cassidy was always an ass and then he comes back and we're supposed to believe he's changed and she loves him now?! Bull. That drives me nuts. I'm glad you said it.