have you thought of posting your stories on ao3? While this helps it didn’t exactly sting, you may get more traction on ao3 as opposed to ffnet. also this website has a tendency to make some bullheaded updates.

Oh good they're dead.
Oh my glob this is the end, isn't it? (If you already said so in the A/N I'm sorry I didn't read it I was too eager to continue reading)
GOOD GLOBIT this was so beautiful! Ugh I don't even know how to express how much I loved this, it was pure perfection and I just... I don't know how to feel, I'm like the fish from finding nemo- what now? I don't know what to do with myself at the moment...

Oh, oops the review for chapter 7 was for chapter 8 but yeah... I mean this chapter was awesome and I couldn't tear my eyes away but this chapter really got me and I needed to express that somehow :P

Milton you little bitch... -.-
At this point I don't even flipping care if they die, they are fake ass friends. Ugh my feeling hurt, I wanna cry with him but more importantly I want jack to be there to make him feel better (I mean I'm guessing Jerry is gonna try and save them but feh! They're a bunch if wusses!)

Very nice ending to a really great story, I'm pleased to say the least. What I got from this ending overall was a twist of unexpected, now I'm not sure if you meant for it to go this way, but the way I see it is even though Jack was supposed to be Jerry's savor, but in the end Jerry ended up being his savor instead again I'm not sure if that's how you made it to be, but if so very nice twist around character wise. Plus the hint that Jack is still around for Jerry not as a ghost, but as a guardian angel again showing how the title of the story fits and how well of a writer you are in this thing call creativity. Thank you, Halia for making this story. I'm sad that is it over as it was my favorite Jarry one in the end the conclusion made it worth all that more wonderful. Well done.

Dang, you always leave us hanging at the good parts. I can't wait until the nex chapter, I really enjoy your work!

Omggggg this was so good! Everything I expected and more...omggggg author nim I seriously love you...like for real. This story is so good, and I f****ing love overprotective jack...makes the cutest scariest boyfriend ive ever seen. Hehe anyway, absolutely love it...keep up the good work! More Jarry scenes please! Hint hint wink wink / *sexy scene* .

Well bye bye Kim and Milton and for the most part probably for the best I mean they were harsh to Jerry so. I really liked the connections you've made between Jack and Jerry even if they were rudely interrupted a lot. To be honest while there is some related elements from SUtBI with this story's chapter it really didn't take away the feel of this of being Jerry's story. To me it's showing just basically how Jack is to Jerry, his protector and plus we now first hand see how Jack does what he does as a ghost in name of Jerry's defense. As always Halia awesome job.

ohh that's a good chapter and i can't wait for the finale of your Jack and Jerry stories

Please update soon author nim! Your an amazing writer, keep up the good work! .

Omgg I swear this is like my fifith time reading this story, because I love it so freaking much. The way Jerry had to find out who his true friends actually were was so sad, and I had so many feels while reading this story. I absolutely love how you portrayed Jacks character, and how protective he is of Jerry. Do I hopefully see some jarry?...mmmm. Hehe! But seriously author nim this story and all your other stories are awesome. Please don't give up... You can do it. Your fans will be 100% behind you! . Thanks for being amazing and writing amazing stories... Keep up the good work and update soon please!

i love this and oh no is jack is gonna kill kim and milton. i can't wait for chapter 9 and see what happend

OHHHHHHHH MILTON AND KIM IN TROUBLE!

Go Jack, make those two suffer!
I like these stories, I really do. It may not be much, but I'd like to apologize for not commenting for a long time. But I'll try my best to comment if Jack kills Kim and Milton!... Or just toy with them, whatever he wants XD

Milton and Kim are dead.