Authornim I've reread this story so many freaking times! My feels still hurt ughhhhh...hehe
What happens next? Is Jack gonna come back? I need to know ahhh!

Oh it hurts! :( Its over!

Omggggggggg that was so good! Holy shittttt what the shsvshwvbsbwjsjsnjskebwjbdjdbeje ahhhhhh I love u authornim like omgggg...nooo jack come back..don't leave your baby! Is this is or is there like an alternate scene where Jerry gets injected and they leave together.. Or another happy ending? Ahhh so goood. Thank you!

This... This isn't the end, is it? PLEASE tell me it isn't the end! O_O
Oh my heart...

OH MY GOSH THIS WAS SO INTENSE HOLY CHEESE I LOVE HOW TWISTED YOU ARE THIS IS SO FLIPPIN AWESOME I CAN'T BELIEVE I'VE YET TO READ THIS UNTIL NOW OH GLOB I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW

good job the ending touch my heart a lot!

Hmm yeah defiantly a bit of M themed on this one that is very much fact, but despite of all that Jack still leaves oh ouch poor Jerry. Though I get Jack's hardship he's a possible threat to him and seeing the only way to ensure he doesn't leaving was the best way to protect him. At least he gave Jerry a remarkable goodbye that he will surely remember. I just don't know how to take away from this ending cause it's basically bittersweet in the sense. Jack's reasoning is valid for his departure, but Jerry just poor Jerry though. I honestly can't give a yay or nay on this ending it's too conflicting to say the least it's like I said it's bittersweet. Good story nonetheless.

Love it! Keep updating!

I really love your Jack/Jerry stories, I really hope you make more, im a sucker for the way you portray Jack and how dark you make him! :)

This is creepy hell good Halia and I mean u did a bloody hell good job in this chapter! Can't wait for the last of this story

I absolutely loveee this story! update soon please! i need more jack/jerry in my life! .

Is it weird that my eyes are watering? I don't know but besides all the delicious gore and violence I love that jerry is so worried for jack even though he's pretty much an indestructible thingy thing that he whispers "I love you" like its a goodbye because he fears for jacks life and not his own and now Jerry's pretty much swimming in his own blood while jacks taking vengeance for not only himself but now Jerry's as well...and as you can tell I'm loving your story. Can't wait for the final chapter!

This is the best chapter of this story I gotta say hands down. The violence and the blood and the gore did I mention the gore? was all just so perfect man I really enjoyed this chapter it was a movie in my head great, great wonderful work Halia. My only thing though is no not Jerry I hope he makes it through or I'll be really disappointed. P.S. I also really enjoyed Jack's rampage.

Very well written. Im sure Jacks really looking foward to that family reunion UPDATE SOON!

WHOA! INTENSE STUFF GOING ON HERE! THAT WAS AMAZING AND JUST NOW JERRY MIGHT BE DEAD WHO KNOW AND OMIGOSH GO JACK!