Reviews for Falling Emerald
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
there should be a sequel to where he is a full ghost and is still a hero
SleepingBeautyRocks chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
*gasps* Jack and Maddie, how could you kill your own son?! You two call yourselves "parents"? You're the worst parents alive!
Derpidot chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
Whoa. My eyes are brimming with tears. Good job.
AmyMc1D chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
that was beautiful. i cant stop crying. the poem thing was so moving i cant even.
Just because chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Because I am weird, I laughed at the end. It's a really good story, it is! I-I... I just can't cry... Even if I wanted to... Hell, even when my grandma died I... I just couldn't cry...

I also fell in love with the spoken word poem.(?)
Dragonscorch chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Wow, that was really well written... :'(
Gliss Phantom chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Poor Jack and Maddie
Yuki082 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
holy hell.
well written though.
-Yuki
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Oh hey lookup a lil ol fanfic I'm just gonna read this and- *after reading fanfic* WHAT THE WHAT?!
Sam: Woah.
Tucker: I say that twice woah woah.
60sec400 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
whoa
little nightingale2 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
OH MY GOSH! You started writing this and I was like, "oh I see what she's doing with the poem thing, niiiiice...! Very creative!..." And I just loved it SO MUCH! You seem so professional, do you take writing classes? Are you like in High school or something? (You SERIOUSLY don't have to say, seems a little stalky to be asking anyways, WHOOPS! 0/0 ) then you made Danny get shot and I'm like, " 0_0... WHY MUST YOU HURT ME THIS WAY!?" And that's the story of how I drowned in tears! :)
anime-tionship chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Dude, why you gotta go and break my heart like that? D:
While it was intolerably sad, great story! The whole thing with Danny being a "Falling Emerald" brilliance was well, brilliance! Sad how Danny had been defeated like that, but beautiful, very beautiful
Vitaliciouscreations chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
I love the poem
Intangible Kittens chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
This was sad, but beautiful. I loved it. :')
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