Very interesting... update more !

PLOT TWIST! Oh god that reaction! Hahahahahaha...

Cliffhanger! I want to know who the baby is. You really are cruel for making me waiting and frustrating.

These are my exact reactions:
"How's the baby?" Fon asked smiling, "He seems to have given you a lot of trouble."
Kyoya's father arched an eyebrow and said, "He?"
Me: I suspect something...

"-Said to have no health complications. Has black hair, tiny hands and feet, got her eyes and nose, my lips and ears. A pretty little baby SHE is.
Me: *Facepalm* Facepalm* *Facepalm* ... You got the characters who have the worst temperaments and placed them in the same home. A landmine few dare to step on. Then you got them all wiled up about Mini-Ass-Kicker (It's got Hibari and Byakuran's DNA... My naming is rather appropriate). I was so worried that Hibari'll suffocate the poor child in it's sleep that I paid no attention to the chapter's name.
It's in a males nature to protect the female counterpart (or that's what they'd like to think), especially when it's an older brother, even more so when the older brother is... stubborn to say the least...
Hibari
...
Byakuran
...
Do you see where I'm going with this!? *Flailing arms in random directions*
*Sighs* That poor girl will never have a life.

Okay, I've finished my rant. Now for the cliché, 'Oh em gee! I lyke! 4 reelz! K date soon!'
... Good God, I was just possessed by a moron.

I do actually have a couple of questions if you're willing to answer. One: Have you finished this story, or at least panned out the direction you would like to go?
Two: If so, why haven't you posted chapter four which will be labeled 'Chapter Three?'
Three: What inspired putting those to time bombs on the same continent, and also what brought you the idea of placing a small girl in the crossfire that will eventually erupt? My guess is your cousin's daughter, though I could be wrong.

I know I should end this excruciatingly long review, but I feel you should be praised with ever word- every character in this review, the ones before, and the ones to come.

It's a damn shame that only sixteen (seventeen after mine) people reviewed. I suppose not a lot of people favor AUs. But if you ask me, it's only a slight AU. That'll be my suggestion, change the description to slight AU. I haven't seen any OOC by far. I'm one of those people who if I see even an ounce of OOCness, I'll drop it. It's just kind of hard when you have a character like Hibari acting kind in any way, shape of form. It's like watching a lion cuddling a gazelle... I think I just found out how he came up with herbivore.
Don't get me wrong, it could be done, though that'll take a ton of character build.

I didn't find anything that would upset me or any of the majority of readers (to be specific the people who aren't trolls).

See now here's where author's (such as myself) would like the opinion of the reviewer concerning what exactly they think will/could/should happen. But, being that I'd feel as if I'm forcing my personal idea on your story, I politely reject. I would really hate if you deterred anything to fit one particular person's preference, because then the story would lose it's orgi-
*Sighs* I'm ranting again. *Bow repeatedly* Sorry. Gomen. Any language you please.
So by now that you reached the end you're probably, what, sixty-five? Seventy?

No, I don't know who the baby is. I'm guessing either Yuni or Haru. You're right, I'm going to leave the story, but I though I should leave a review just to inform you that you should take off the Tsunayoshi character tag. Misusing tags is one of the biggest signs of a crappy story. Or if you really do plan on having Tsuna as an important role, please change the "Sawada" part in the chapter.

I don't know who is the baby. I have guess but I don't know.

Good job! XD I can't wait 4 the next chapter! XD ...Fon's here! XD

Is it yuni?
And yeah i thought that tsu-chan is gonna be the baby lol.

hahahahaha it's a "SHE" hahaha XD their reactions in the end are just so funny I am still laughing while typing this review. But yeah, kinda fooled me there. I really thought that Tsu-kun was the baby but still this story is exciting and all. I kind of dismissed the thought that Tsu-kun is the baby when the Saya-chan-girl said something about Mrs Sawada and all.

Lol I'm talking nonsense here, I think. Still this story is so awesome! It's the first time that I read something like this and I'm really happy that I found this one. Ohh I'm going to wait for the next chapter! fufufu XD

hahaha that was funny i wonder if she will be as manipulative a bya with kyo violence

Oh wow, I thought the baby was Tsuna...lol. Cool plot twist.

I think, for all it counts, it was a nice twist. Gonna take a guess: Yuni. If it isn't, or if it will be an OC, then I guess I'd better read on! I'm glad that someone came up with such a convulted idea and it definitely sticks out in the crowd of fics. Just have to laugh that they're planning each others' deaths! And way to go, blunt Kyoya! See you next time!

Pfffthahhhahaha... It's a girl

Also, at first I had thought 'oh shit, yaoi?' and was about to skip it when I saw the 'stepbrothers' bit.

... I was like-

"HOLY CRAP, BYAKURAN AND HIBARI?! SIBLINGS?!"

No one would expect this type of story- but you actually made it. You actually. Made it.

Wonder what comes next

I love it! Can't wait until he's born!

The bsby boy's Tsu chan...right? XD Cause if he is, yay! XD