Weird just to throw Rose in as Emmetts wife with no mention of her throughout the whole story until now.

Great analysis Edward. Keep her away from Forks. Also why are they still there? Bella’s been gone for years.

Slightest! Slightest?! Phil is an impeccable douche. And Renee, well... Her child should come first. Dessert Renee really? Phil’s love and concern for Bella is verbally abusive. Renee didn’t even defend the girl. So now we understand the drinking and drunk issues.

So Bella has issues with drinking and drunks? Parents? Ex boyfriend?

I’m confused with that whole cop exchange. Why would she have to apologize he was a “bar dick.” And her submissive reaction was odd.

A few chapters ago you said Emmett had a wife. So I’m guessing with all his loud talking he’s single with reason. I get Bella’s point about keeping her head down but being a doormat is another thing all together right? I’m glad Edward gave her a hug.

I FLOVED when he call Jake Dingleberry. I’m still fucking laughing my ass off. Just saying

i have read this story so many times now, and i love it every time. especially Dash the Horrible at the end. i had a feeling it was coming, because canon em would have been all over something like that, with his goofy self

This was a cute little story!

Cute story. Love this Edward. Thanks.

Puré awesomeness

Happy ending and so cute. I loved your story. They all seemed so happy. I would have loved to know about how Charlie was doing, maybe phil and Renee also. Thanks for sharing.

That was nice. I was surprised Bella brought up marriage and so glad edward already had the ring. It seemed kind of perfect. I loved that Edward thought of Charlie, which was more for Bella which makes him a awesome partner if her.

Poor Charlie, I feel bad for him.

That was pretty hot.