You'd be great at writing psychological horror scripts. Also it was cool what you did there with the fanfiction gay couples. I had to look up the Alexander one though, never seen that before.

That was one of the most engaging and exciting fanfics I have ever read. It spans fandoms in that last chapter and I literally could not stop reading once I started. I was reading at night so the first few chapters creeped the hell outta me. Honestly the best story I've read in a very long time and well worth the sleep deprivation.

I love you. Amazing inteligent story, you have TALENT!

This so fucked with my brain... I love it.

Pretty damn good. I think you did the ships justice, though a little more chulu would be nice. Thank you for contributing a well written story with a good plot line to the world

Loved it. Great dialog!

Congratulations, you are the first one to creep me out. :D

Ooh my god, I should read the rest of this during the day and not in a dark room, but I'm reaaaally curious.

This story was so awesome - I'm so glad I found it! I think that you deserve waaaaaay more reviews and favorites, I'm confused. I love how you did everything, and gah it was great. It was just the perfect mixture of mystery, sci-fi, humor, friendship, romance... Seriously awesome job. I truly enjoyed reading this. You definitely have all characterization down pat, too. ;) I also want you to know that I'm really impressed with how you constructed this; I can tell that it took a LOT of time and thought. Way to go, and thank you very much for posting this wonderful story!

Now this was great!

I LOVE THIS STORY IT'S AMAZING! You write all of them beautifully, especially Spock and I love how you've written Bones! The plot is so amazingly detailed and wow it really is brilliant and the science behind it you seem to have really made an effort with, instead of just waving it off with wibbley-wobbley timey-win0mey stuff ;) and yay John and Sherlock and Arthur and Merlin, I have to say it would be interesting to know what they had to go through at the ha ds of the Validators. And did I detect a Friends reference in the beginning, where Bones is like "I'm a Doctor not a mathmatician" (Joey says it at one point while pretending to be a doctor and completely failing at maths)?
Anyway this is absolutely awesome and I'd love to see it continued, and that future scene between Spock, Kirk and salad was so adorable! Great writing and I hope to see more of this at some point if you could :D

My goodness. You had an incredibly engaging premise! I enjoyed the time paradoxes, the quantum physics, the mind-bending, hard-to-think-about bits that made this story as fun as heck to read. I particularly loved the way you completed the first predestination curve, with the bloody hand reaching out and how that came back around. Gloriously well captured. :) Loved the storyline, the story-telling, the characters. I think you had Bones' voice down pat, in particular.

The one part that didn't fit in was the "dream" where Kirk first foresees injured Spock. The sex scene detracted from the overall feel of the story as it was unfolding; a discordant note, if you will. Up to that point, the subtle, forward steps of Kirk and Spock's relationship are there (and the reader is curiously wondering how it will all play out), but then we're bombed by this image - before resuming the subtle, fluffy progression that culminates with a kiss. It just didn't seem to fit in a story where things, literally, come back at you.

I did, however, enjoy the rest of the tale. The ending was (as you probably intended) not one that I could have guessed. The fact that you literally told the story of the Enterprise Crew being Legendary was hilarious! It was a great twist for such an epic tale. And you did a marvelous job introducing the Validators in a way that kept the story's momentum without watering down the ending. I love how you did that. It hurts my head to follow, but it was certainly NOT a disappointing ending. Thank you for this legendary tale of legends; I only wish it had been longer. The epic ended much too soon. :)

Wow.. this is Epic, love the mystery , action,sci-fi and definitely the awesome crew and k/s, will be following the series.. Thanks for writing this amazing fic (:

This was a great story!

I thought this story was awesome. Totally wasn't expecting it to go the way it did. Great job!