This was so cute. I am sitting here watching Harry Potter, rereading this story. The best thing is that this is Modern AU, which really fits the well-written banter. I usually read- and prefer- Canon era fics, so without sounding big-headed, it says something when I buy into a one-shot like this. I think it might be because of how well-thought out this is. The banter is no doubt modern, but sounds so very like Merlin-Arthur banter. I think your dialogue was excellent. Also, you are attentive in keeping this believable as slash. Many writers fall into the predictable hole of making Arthur girlish and portraying the couple in a really fluffy way. You don't do this; Arthur and Merlin remain essentially like typical men. Even the love scenes don't cause any problems because it is done in such a boyish way it is still convincing. I really enjoyed this, having reread it about four times in one sitting. Funny, sweet and entertaining. Well done.

Just perfect the dialogue between the boys so glad Merlin has his true love.

It's very beautiful, they are finally together in the modern world.