Wonderful story

Aaw that was lovely and touching

So sad and so beautiful. I would love for you to write a Mina-lives fic, especially with your brilliant writing, you truly know how to put emotions in words.

In the movie it really didn't seem like Hansel cared too much for Mina. I really like how you dealt with it here though :) wonderful job

Wonderfully done! There was a kind of power in the soft flow of the story. You made both their reactions so realistic and true to character. Keep writing more!

Love! :) I really love the title and the whole idea behind it :) Nicely done, as always. Really nice job on this, sad, but sweet. I really love the most though is how you describe everything and you put so much emotion and work into your stories; it's absolutet amazing. You describe emotions, characters, scenes, surroundings; etc. so perfectly and you make the readers completely drawn to the story, making them desire for more :)

Any who, haha, love it a lot, excellent job! Keep up the amazing work! :D

Awesome. So rich in feeling yet far from cheesy.