Wow. Amazing. Unfinished.

I'm not sure why I've never read this before but I just read it now and I'm in tears. I can't believe this was from 2013.. I'm not sure if you were planning to continue this or if it was a one shot but it stands alone so well regardless. It says everything without having to say anything at all and that is so much talent right there. It was so heartbreaking to read and a deep look into their feelings that we were robbed from seeing play out on the show. There is so much I could highlight in this but the image of her closing her eyes during Lewis and focusing on "his face, his eyes, the sound of him" this part broke me to pieces, because that would have been exactly what she would have done.

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Just a quick note to say that Landslide is incredible and I can't wait to read more, BUT that I also fucking LOVE Ninety-Nine and read have read it a couple times a year since you originally published. Would die for another chapter :D

I promise to leave a more coherent review when my brain can process things properly lol.

I already know this one will have me in tears, too.

Also, why didn't Elliot wake ME up in the hospital 5 years ago? lmao

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WOW, hello, I know this is from 2013 but I'd really really love for you to continue it.
Also, a super hard topic, but this is the best fic I've read discussing it. PLEASEEEEE consider writing more

I wish you’d write more of this.

Olivia's suffering is far more realistic in this little story than it ever was shown in the actual show. Not sure if you ever planned to continue this but it stands firmly on its own as it is. Very raw and real. But if there's more, I'm here for it :)

Wonderful writing. So much is said without any dialog. I love the way you weave the words into a vine that adds and subtracts what points are needed to fluidly bring them together so that everything the reader needs is laid out in front of them. Very nice to read.

Wow! Please come back to this story.

I may be a bit late to the table, but please say you have not abandoned this. I have been fortunate enough to have read some of your other SVU fanfiction. The incredible stories and beautiful writing have rendered me a Lyricara addict; unfortunately for me, your work can be somewhat of a challenge to find, and often requires searching across multiple platforms (although I will say here that I owe major thanks to some individual Tumbler users!).
I realize that it's been SIX YEARS since you posted this piece, but on the off-chance you had written more at that timeand should the planets align favorablyit would be amazing if you uploaded it...
But most of all, thank you for all of the amazing work you have shared with us!

This is amazingly raw and powerful. The physical details, the tightness of her skin, the rawness of her throat, the burning of her skin...then there's the swirling confusion of her thoughts, her desire to give in and to keep fighting warring with each other...wow. And then there's the same with Elliot, so angry, so crushed by how much he understands about what's NOT written in the report...this is outstanding.

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Wonderfully written. :)