Hopefully this will be updated someday. I quite enjoyed it

I really like this story but I can't read any further. Not with everyone taking advantage of Allen's good heart. Hermione's spying and no one reprimanding her for it - I just can't take it anymore. It doesn't help that I was starting to ship Tonks and Allen together.

I'm so glad I found this sorry of yours, it's rate to see a different version of crossovers with D. Gray-man and HP. This plot is going great and I'm quite surprised you managed to mush the time lines and fitted it with the cannon, though it'd be diverged now. It's a good change too, to see Hermione becoming a focus character instead of Harry. Anyways, I'm loving it so far and it's not the typical plot (which is brilliant, btw). Thanks for this amazing story and I shall be eager to await for more.

Woow, the fan plot is really great! Hope you update soon, we'll be waiting.

It's awesome story. I love how Hermione is the main focus and not Harry like it usually is. And characters aren't plastic and unreal. I like it, and want more. Update soon!

YES PLEASE ACT ON THE RANDOM EVIL THOUGHT! But maybe Allen still remembers being Red... And won't just give up his body... So compromises with Nea to destroy things together? WOULD BE SO AWESOME okay I'm sorry shutting up now

I love how original this is. I think this is my fourth time reading it
Very curious about what the future of this fic will bring x

I hope there are no pairings

OMG! I'm totally in love with your story! This is a amazing plot you have here, I'm very excited about what will happen next!
Great job

Very good chapter. I really enjoyed it. Do you plan on continuing it? It's been a couple of months and I am looking forward to how this story continues.

And Hallow was amazing but too short but, considering that it ended only I think three or four chapters away from where the manga is now, that's not that big of a surprise.

Update soon.

I just binge-read this. It was so good I couldn't put it down. This is amazing, and I hope you continue it!

Well, I just spent half a day reading this whole thing. Very different, very enjoyable. I hope to see some more soon!

I love this story I cant wait for the next chapter love it

This was one of the best stories I've read in a very, very long time. You've gotten all the character personalities down perfectly, and you've kept me on the edge of my seat since I started reading it. I am very eagerly awaiting the next coming chapters. Good luck, and keep writing my friend.

I am... so proud of both Hermione and Allen. At first, I was shocked that Allen would shut her out so painfully (but oh so deliciously) despite her sincerity, but when he continued with that self-recriminating spiel that was probably the most honest and open he's been with Hermione by his own volition... ahh my heart just broke a little for these two. I'm so glad to see they're finally on the same page, finally trying to understand the other. I am so eager to see where you take this now that you've diverged from canon. Bring on the pain!