cute but sad
Its really impressive that you can pack so much emotion into such a short story

This is a great, but I want you to tell it in a way I can feel the emotions of the characters. What you've got here is a plot bunny, not a story.

Eh...this seems more like a summary of a fic than an actual fic. I like the story, but it would have been best to refine and embellish it much more than you have.

Without Hiccup, things could never have been as good, but they got by.

Wow

OMG I was crying hard but over all great story!