You have very high potential, and this is a good idea for a story. The pacing is a bit too quick, I admit, but otherwise I can see an aspiring writer in you. Keep up the good work! You're gonna go far, kid, as they say.

This is a nice story! I saw you get recommended by Kittycatpony along with me, so I decided to check you out. And trust me, I totally understand the not-updating-in-an-eternity scenario, it happened all the time with my previous account. Well done with this!

I love it! Please update fast! Tho I can understand if you don't. :P

This is precious

Woah! Really good start! normally I don't read FrUk, but the summary really tied me in. Oh Alfred. Oh my goodness can't wait to read on

Oh my goodness Alfred...

I loled at the end. XD still loving it!

This is going to be good

FrUK and Alfred is Arthur's son? I like this already. XD

I stopped reading at the words "His husband Francis". Sorry. I just don't like that combo.

I like where this is going. Keep it up!