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TheShadeOps chapter 16 . 7/31/2014 From one "air nut" to another, did it annoy you in MW2 where they had F-15s (a land based fighter) being used by the Navy, and in the opening briefing thing to that mission, with the JDAM "Missile" (actually a series of bombs) being fitted on an F-15, which when command called it, the subtitle said "F-35 pilot" or something like that? ANYWAY, good chapter as always, good to know us writers can watch each other's backs, can't wait for the next chapter! |
MasterDerp5885 chapter 15 . 7/22/2014 YAY! SO HAPPY! :D Thank you for updating! Loved the chapter! The story does not feel rushed to me, but whatever you decide to do with it, that would be ok :) Keep it up and keep updating! :D :) |
TheShadeOps chapter 15 . 7/21/2014 Didn't you upload this on "Unity"? |
5th Allen chapter 15 . 7/21/2014 Are you going to keep writing namesake? |
Helven chapter 14 . 5/17/2014 More chapters I am sad that it ended please write more chapters |
MasterDerp5885 chapter 14 . 2/13/2014 SWEET! I loved this chapter like the rest of them! I love the way you put Archer and Toad together, they're my favorite! :3 Keep it up and keep posting! :) :D |
ScrumtousToast chapter 14 . 2/12/2014 THANK GOD you updated. I don't know what I would've done if this story would've gone on hiatus. This is going to be one of the best Call of Duty Fanfic's EVER. Keep writing this, it's amazing! |
WheresDaBeef chapter 14 . 2/11/2014 Can we just take a moment to appreciate how fantastic Toad and Archer are together? I love them soooo much! They're so adorable! And that explains how Price ended up in the gulag! Also, thank you for having Ghost beat up Shepard. He really deserved that, and I'd do it myself if I could. Awesome chapter, and update soon! |
paramoron chapter 14 . 2/11/2014 It was really good, as usual. I loved the Archer x Toad bit. And Dash's flashback. Update soon! |
paramoron chapter 13 . 1/8/2014 Archer and Toad are so adorable and you write them so well! Just a little tip, Shepherd, not Sheppard, sorry! Otherwise it was brilliant as usual, and it would be nice to have some more Dash x Ghost cos they're brilliant together. |
DoneGoofed29 chapter 13 . 1/6/2014 So I'm reading this, amazing story, then while Ghost and Dash are making out in the shower, I got confused near the end and I'm like " Whadda Fack? " Amazing story. I love it. And yet for some reason I can't escape the feeling that Dash is going to betray Ghost, and do some stuff with Roach. I really wish you would continue this series, even though it's probably a year or two old ( didn't check the dates ). I love the relationship you formed between Toad and Archer. It caught me off guard, but I was blown away by that, even though you suggested it in the previous chapter. Keep up the beautiful work, Spitfire! |
ScrumtousToast chapter 13 . 12/23/2013 I think it'd be a really interesting plot twist if you continued the story in the MW3 area. *shady look* Everyone likes plot twists… |
MasterDerp5885 chapter 13 . 12/22/2013 I loved the back story of Archer and Toad! It was really good! I loved this chapter it was awsome! Yay, they captured Sheppard! Can't wait to find out what will happen next! Keep it up and keep posting! :) :D |
MasterDerp5885 chapter 12 . 12/20/2013 Thank you! Those cliffhangers started to drive me crazy! I loved the way you discribed Ghost's eyes! The ArcherxToad was so cute! Never thought about it... Keep updating! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Keep posting please! :) :D |
paramoron chapter 12 . 12/20/2013 AW THAT WAS SO CUTE AW AW AW! And they've been rescued. AND YOU MADE GHOST GET SHOT, HOW DARE YOU! It was so good though, much action happened! |