Oh good ga no. No. Harry needs to go save her! Oh dear. Please update soon!

lol is one day quick? lol cool lol

great chap

Great chapter! Eagerly awaiting the rest!

LOL! im sorry. with all my groundings and all. i just sent you an email so... well anyway, great chap your fic is great. please update soon
im going to girls camp from may 31 to june 4. so i wont be here to do any betaing.
i wont be here to see hp 3 in theater the day it comes out which realy stinks i realy wanted to o well june 5 is fine lol!

A special thank you to me? I am so flattered! I hope my editing helped and I would like to compliment you again on a wonderful chapter. Keep up the great work!

this is a really good mix of action and...not action...i guess thats the word for it..anyway, i just noticed that as i was pressing the button, but i really liked that story, it gives a nice break from all that lovely action. its not too boring though. and actually, i didnt se etoo many gramatical or spelling errors, maybe that was just me...keep writing!
Magical Myth

Actually, I take what I said about Lucas back. After re-reading the chapter, he's not that bad. He and Erika could very possibly make a cute couple. Anyways I don't even know if they are going to go out and you're probably really sick of me so I'll just shut up now.
Oh and still a great story!

I am a really bad person. First I beg you to give Erika some love life but if Lucas is it I might protest! Ack you must hate me. Sorry I just don't like the way he kept following her around. It bothered me. But who knows maybe he'll turn out to be this great guy and I'll find him and Erika the cutest couple ever. Or mabye Lucas isn't her love interest at all.
I ALMOST FORGOT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE that you made Percy and Penelope engaged. In other people's stories hardly anyone ever follows up on that so that made me really happy.
Anyways you have a super-great-fabulous story as usual and as ususal PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

great chapter! update soon please

great chapter! the new characters make a good plot change, and i like the Sight thingy you have going on. keep writing!
Magical Myth

hi, my name is gemma macs. i was looking on the internet trying desparitly to find when the next harry potter book was coming out, as it's my sons favourite series. as i was doing this i stumbled across your story. i wanted to tell you that you have an amazing imagination. your stoyline is great. you need to watch they way in which you convay your story. i noticed that you've put the whole story into first persons, swoping between charactors. this can be effective when used correctly. if you stil wish to use this method i have some suggestions that would better your story. i suggest that you only pick two charactors to jump between. by doing this you will not only keep your story simple but you will also keep the secracy of charactor. meaning you dont have to know what every charactor is thinging all the time. try using other techniques to show that. this means you can add more mystery to the plot. by not jumping between charactors your writing will become a lot smoother. the only problem with putting your stoy into the first person is that the series "harry potter" is told in the second person. when people read this particular story of yours they will mainly be doing so because they want more harry potter and they want it the way their used to it. the way j. has writen it. to suddenly jump into a new method of telling the story through effect to make it clearly your own does effect they way in which i, as the reader respond to it. the only other thing is you've got to watch out for double negatives. i noticed you had one a couple of times. besides that i think this story is a great acheivement and would really like to know how old you are. i am a full qualifyed english teacher and would be more than happy to read and review any of your storys if you wish to send them to me. good luck with your writing...
gemma

Great story as always! Keep up the great work and please update SOON!

I know it took me forever to review, my apologies, but the day I read this chapter for the first time, it wouldn't let me review (**insert sad face here**) so yeah. Good chapter, I wonder who's leaking to the press! And I hope Meagan and Erica get their boyfriends soon (although not too soon - they need more time to get in with teh whole boyfriend thing). Anyways great chapter and update soon!

hi again! this is really cool, and it doesnt seem too farfetched to me...please post soon, i want to read more! o by the way, i love the long chapters you have. i read so many things that have short chapters, and its kinda useless, so please keep them nice and long and everyone will be happy...
Magical Myth

so did you like add a difrent ending cause i dont rember that but it is still really go and please update as soon as the writters cramp . I loved it!