Great story!

could've done with a little less exposition but over all it's very cute! thank you for sharing this with us!

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That was a really cool story. Well done!

This was really great. I loved the pacing and how it was long. I'm also glad how Lucy and Natsu weren't very OC.

*Has died from squealing too much*

This was pretty cute and hot, I like this fic very much. Not a big fan of the whole taking a mate part, though. Oh well. I'm be sure to also read your GaLe fic.

I just wonder how will Gajeel and Wendy will take it but the others they would say to her wat happened. In my own thought Handel will be all smirking and stuff and Wendy ( oh Wendy) will be blushing like crazy when she'll see that. Anyway what was your whole idea of this and what I mean is that why would you put mating in there or like why putting n and l ( natsu and lucy and I did this because I want to ) mating there. I mean anyone who see animal planet or in real life knows what it means and it was just disgusting to tell the readers how they had it and what they felt about this. Other than that it was so detailed an interesting that there's people in th story that know the characteristics of the dragon's and the dragon slayer. :) :l

O3O KAWAII. Good tory. 10/10

good ending...FOR A CHAPTER' 方づでいいねえで遂げてtじぇ版がオフ絵ヴェrytじんhおぁy？

love it brought tears to my eyes continue writing

Damn that was amazing! Really creative and hot! It was really well written :)

Terrific

Awww. I can't get enough of these two!

I have to admit for a 'soft porn'(?) Or erotic story, this is AMAZING. Part of me thinks Natsu is OOC, but the other part thinks that if they did throw this in the series, I wouldn't be surprised if there were some similarities.

I love how well written and paced this story is, even how the minor OCS seem to be placed just perfectly. I had to read it twice, and probably will again in the future. The long one shot is a little unnerving, as I feel it should be broken into a few chapters, but that's very minor. Other than that...wow. I love this! Thanks for a great addition. Fave!